Warrior Cats of the Forest
of the Forest
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Wolf-flower
My Cover
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This is going to be my cover on my warriors book, Dragonstar's Story. I wanted criticism from you guys more than anyone else. So...what do you think?
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Oh and maybe make the face more symmetrical? Or markings?
I think Thrushsoar covered most of it.It's pretty good, except that you should probably make the tail more connected to tthe body.
I just realized there was a typo. Missing, not messing. ^^' Sorry.
Kk, my dad works at a book printing company so he could probably edit that with like photoshop or something.:)
I like the markings on the face and the little cat at the bottom ^^
Maybe you could blend the colors along the edge of the face or make it more defined?
Possibly fill in white spaces?
Maybe you could blend the colors along the edge of the face or make it more defined?
Possibly fill in white spaces?
Oh! Of course! If you need any help, I'll always be around, especially for art!
Ok, i'll use your help. I told you, I really don't mind criticism, it helps me alot, actually! 
Alright then.
1 - You are messing a left leg. Draw a little thing poking out or something and it will be perfect.
2 - Your kitten's too skinny. It needs to be wider. Search up some sitting kitten pictures, and then use them for reference.
3 - Your ears are too low, raise them and they'll be good.
1 - You are messing a left leg. Draw a little thing poking out or something and it will be perfect.
2 - Your kitten's too skinny. It needs to be wider. Search up some sitting kitten pictures, and then use them for reference.
3 - Your ears are too low, raise them and they'll be good.
Um, are you okay with me straight out telling you (bluntly, honestly) or would you like me to tell you in a less harsh way? I don't want to offend you!
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