Warrior Cats of the Forest
of the Forest
Subtitle
Sunkenskull
Chapter 1: Nadine
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Huzzah! I finally finished this chapter...took like a week. It's pretty long but I'm quite of proud how it turned out X) Click the link below to read and I hope you like! This chapter is the first chapter of Sunken's life.
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it 
It's really fun writing and translating the warrior's universe into a humanized version. The kittypet's are one of the most enjoyable portrayals, for me at least, to write X)
It's really fun writing and translating the warrior's universe into a humanized version. The kittypet's are one of the most enjoyable portrayals, for me at least, to write X)
O: Well the whole stabbing thing was unexpected, but very nicely played off I love how you've brought the kitty-pet warriors world and expanded it into a human concept. And I think you did an amazing job of including all the aspects of that lifestyle.
I think it was a really great insight into Sunken's past and story, and just brings her character even more to life. She really had changed a lot from being the shy little Naomi she was as a kid.
I love how you've brought the kitty-pet warriors world and expanded it into a human concept. And I think you did an amazing job of including all the aspects of that lifestyle.
I think it was a really great insight into Sunken's past and story, and just brings her character even more to life. She really had changed a lot from being the shy little Naomi she was as a kid.
This is chapter one, as the full story isn't on Wattpad, only parts of it because it was too long to post in the comments. The whole story is in my album on here, just read this first and then the next chapter will be the picture right after this one and it will be in the description. And then I think you can figure it out from there. Sometimes it will be written in the description, sometimes in the comments, and other times there will be a link to Wattpad 
Thank you! And yay! I'm glad it made you laugh X) And writing the kids was my favorite part
Nice chapter!
Wonderful dialogue as always, I'd be lying if I said a few parts hadn't made me laugh. All of the characters have a lot of personality, it's fun to read the kids interacting with each other and seeing how much, or how little, they changed over time.
Wonderful dialogue as always, I'd be lying if I said a few parts hadn't made me laugh. All of the characters have a lot of personality, it's fun to read the kids interacting with each other and seeing how much, or how little, they changed over time.
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