The link to the text is in the comments below. There was no way I copying pasting that amount of writing and edit every single time webs replaced a " or ' with a question mark.
I lauhed at the part where the kid looks at her. "f___?" and then all of the start yelling out the words and squeal with excitement. XD
Nicely done, Sunken.
Thank you...but graaah the typos shall murder me!...but I'm too lazy to edit them out...heh.
and yes I think we've established it's very bloody XD
...at least I didn't do a picture of David's face...that would have been worse...
Well I can see why you took three days to write this! I agree with Emberstar, this is definitely the best one yet and it really shows your talent as a writer (also the picture is very bloody)
Dawn, you might want to read the story passages before this one so you won't be utterly confused X)
and yeah, sorry I forgot to worn you it appears to be...7 pages long? XD
I have a feeling none of you read the link XD
guys...pull yourselves away from the picture which took me a minute and read the passage that I work like three days on XD
Oops!
Oops, you forgot something.