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Posted by Ember on June 5, 2015 at 1:15 PM

This upcoming weekend (Friday the 5th to Sunday the 7th) we have a battle scheduled, MoonClan and DawnClan will band together to carry out their first attack on NightClan, who will go to SunClan for support. The battle will be long with no clear winner, MoonClan and DawnClan will withdraw with the excuse that they have weakened NightClan enough to be able to return when their own strength has returned and destroy the clan, NightClan will claim that they were forced to flee.'


In the last plot planning blog entry Storm&Co suggested a new arc involving the leaders being overthrown that gathered quite a bit of enthusiasm. Angel and I have been throwing ideas back and forth for a bit and decided that it would be best if the current sickness plot lead directly to this, rather than ending this arc, waiting a bit, and beginning that one.

Following the battle taking place this weekend, the sickness will spread rapidly through MoonClan and DawnClan. Many more cats will fall ill, especially among those wounded in the battle. MoonClan and DawnClan leadership will begin to weaken and their clan’s criticism of them rise following a number of mistakes, openly beginning to break under stress, or perhaps saying or doing something perceived as cowardly, such as abandoning their commitment to destroying NightClan. What exactly this is should be planned for larger mistakes, but for smaller mistakes it will be up to the leaders themselves how they want their own leaders to begin to fall.

Weepingtiger will discover a plant that can be used to treat the disease and grows only in the thickest sections of DawnClan and MoonClan’s territories. He will share this knowledge with DawnClan’s medicine cats, but they will keep it secret from their enemy clans and point to the recovery of their warriors as being StarClan’s favor to their clans, and, most importantly, their medicine cats. This will place the medicine cats in a favored position among these clans, particularly in contrast to the seemingly weak leaders. Jaystar and Willowstar will make the mistake of attacking NightClan again when their warriors are still recovering, against Weepingtiger and Leorio’s public advice to wait. This will be a devastating battle for them.

Weepingtiger will capitalize on this situation to gather the support of his clan to run out or kill Jaystar, claiming to have received a prophecy from StarClan telling him to do so. His clan will support him and the new clan structure and values he proposes. The new leadership will be similar in structure to a tribe, with a combined leader and medicine cat position. To compensate for the fewer number of cats in charge that this would cause, there could be two medicine cat apprentices at a time, the medicine cat/leader would choose who would be their successor and they’d be a deputy medicine cat, or whatever title we decide to give them. They would take a very direct and important position in managing the clan, including giving periodic talks to the apprentices and warriors of the clan about StarClan and their code. These leader medicine cats will advocate for a closeness with StarClan and mandate that all clan cats worship them. They will be strict with the warrior code, even minor infractions will result in severe punishments. Stress will be placed on the birth of new kits, to strengthen their clan, as well as on apprentices and warriors spending a greater portion of their time serving the clan. Their modified code would include changes such as a rule specifying medicine cats not being allowed to have kits, that a clan cannot overthrow their leader unless both medicine cat apprentices agree and receive a sign from StarClan, that the warriors do not need to come to the aid of others, even enemy kits, because loyalty to their own clans is their greatest duty, the clans may chase out other clans who do not believe in StarClan—things like that. This new code will need to be drafted, ideas for rules to be added are greatly appreciated. The leader medicine cats will be appointed by the website owner as they will be in an even higher position of power than the current leaders.

Under this new structure, MoonClan will attack NightClan again and be more successful, or be able to successfully defeat a NightClan attack. While this will have more to do with the sickness having being eradicated from their clan while it remains strong in NightClan, Weepingtiger will pin their victory on StarClan’s approval, prompting DawnClan to fall to this new system of leadership as well.

All of this new arc is still up in the air, of course. This plan can be changed, it is just what Angel and I came up with for larger plot points, with ideas of my own to transition through these bigger plot points. It will be one of the more dramatic plots that we have had on the website, and will require a large commitment from all members to work correctly. After the plot has run its course, the new leadership will fall again and the clans will return to their traditional structure.

 

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88 Comments

Reply Lost
2:03 PM on June 5, 2015 
Wow... Thats a lot to process... I might need to re-read this a few times..
Reply Ripple
3:09 PM on June 5, 2015 
Was SunClan purposely left out in the suggested plot?
Reply Ember
3:20 PM on June 5, 2015 
They will be a smaller part in it than the other clans just from where they are now in the current plot, but they will be supporting NightClan and may play a major role in ending the new leadership once we get there. If someone has an idea for how to pull them more into it, that would be great.
Reply Airmid
3:46 PM on June 5, 2015 
This is a lot to take in! But also, a question- are all of the clans going to e affected by this new leadership? Just clarifying.
Reply Ember
3:51 PM on June 5, 2015 
Just MoonClan and DawnClan, since it will spring from their commitment to destroying NightClan :)
Reply Airmid
3:53 PM on June 5, 2015 
Ah, alright. Also, I jut read Willowstar is stepping down, so..??how will that affect the plot?
Reply Hero
4:24 PM on June 5, 2015 
This is a lot to take in. Like a lot, I may need to read this a few times. But I love stuff that changes in the roleplay. Its so exciting to me Ember. You guys thought about a lot didn't you? I would never be able to think about any of this. Wow. But its all a great idea.
Reply Ember
4:27 PM on June 5, 2015 
I don't think it will cause any big differences, Lotuswhisper and her deputy will be overthrown instead of Willowstar and Lotuswhisper.
Thanks, Hero. :)
Reply Airmid
4:35 PM on June 5, 2015 
Ah alright. *rubs hands together* lets have some fun! Jk,jk. For the code, and about not helping enemy kits, are those who help enemy kits going to be punished?
Reply Ember
4:39 PM on June 5, 2015 
Yes, they probably would be, considering how strict the new leadership is planned on being. What exactly that punishment would be is up to the leader/medicine cat.
Reply Silverwind (busy)
5:01 PM on June 5, 2015 
I guess that I?m going to be the only one really against all this change in the roleplay, but here goes:

Aw that's just messed up... -.- I wouldn't have it that Jaystar would be killed, if it would be my say. Maybe they can force her to step down, just so that she can live a normal life, even if it has to be in another clan? The "prophecy" thing doesn't seem right, either, since why would a medicine cat have to lie, seemingly to meet their own wants or needs? Wouldn't that make them a bad medicine cat if they were trying to do what might be happening? The whole restructuring of the hierarchy thing doesn't sound like something that would work, but that might just be me thinking that. That thing with complete and total loyalty to just their own clans, and not coming to the aid of even kits seems just messed up. :/ It's part of the warrior code to do that, helping a kit, even from another clan if they are in need, if I'm remembering the Warrior Code correctly. And there's always the 16th rule in the Warrior Code and probably the one that probably isn't used all that much when the roleplay uses the Warrior Code: Each Clan has the right to be proud and independent, but in times of trouble they must forget their boundaries and fight side by side to protect the four. Each Clan must help the others so that no Clan will fall. (Something that I thought would have fit perfectly for when they are trying to all work together to figure out a cure for the illness.)

But seriously, for a clan so devout to StarClan, I wouldn?t ever picture a MoonClan Medicine cat, out of any cat in all of the clans to likely end up doing something so selfish; even if they think that it's for the good of their own clan. It just doesn?t fit into the personality of the clan to do something like this (not considering the personality of the cat in question). All this would likely make StarClan angry with MoonClan, at least if that would be allowed. I would imagine that there would be something that would happen to make the medicine cat see what they had done was wrong and that they would beg StarClan?s forgiveness. I haven?t any good ideas, yet, as to what might be possible or probable to happen if things were to seemingly turn against MoonClan for their ?crimes? against the Code, so I?m not going to try just suggesting things without thinking them through, so that they're more likely to be accepted or at least considered.
Reply Whiteflower
5:15 PM on June 5, 2015 
I like this plot. I see your point, Silver, but Weepingtiger isn't exactly what I would call a traditional Moonclan medicine cat. If I read his bio right, he was a warrior in the first place, then became a medicine cat, and well.... He fits the destroyer-of-clans medicine cat job. At least, I think he does.
This sounds pretty wicked! I love the idea of a whole new sort of Moonclan; it sounds like a scary cult! XD Lets do this!
Reply Lost
5:32 PM on June 5, 2015 
This is a bit confusing for my simple mind. If Jaystar is going to be ran out, does that mean Oceancurrent will too?
Reply Halo
6:46 PM on June 5, 2015 
So I have some suggestions for SunClan, and you all have authority to tell me its stupid. Say SunClan found out about the herbs. Then they would know that MoonClan/DawnClan cats weren't getting better because StarClan intended it so, but because of this herb. This information could be obtained in numerous different ways. SunClan could try and steal the herbs from MoonClan territory, since trying to sneak into the water logged DawnClan would be illogical for their ground orientated warriors. However they get caught, with very harsh punishments. Even perhaps death to make it more impacting but that's up to the leaders. This gives Weepingtiger and his leaders the perfect platform to strengthen his Clans belief in his regime and his intentions. SunClan may or may not inform NightClan about the herb, informing NightClan would cement their disbelief in StarClan because Weepingtiger lied about his "prophecies". Not informing NightClan would surely destroy their alliance, seeing as many NightClan cats died and SunClan would be to blame for not telling them about a cure. All of this is just theory and NightClan/SunClan reactions are how I would foresee it. My foresight is slightly uninformed though, not knowing the leaders at that time. The timing: I think this could develop either early or later in the plot, really anytime. This could all just be a smaller side plot, unless something comes up to tie this nicely with the downfall of Weepingtiger. Assuming people actually like it, remember, its just a thought. A really long thought. XD TL;DR Have SunClan know about the herb, try steal it and fail, various other repercussions of this.
Reply Hickory
7:01 PM on June 5, 2015 
I would have to agree with Silver on this.... Not to be rude, but Weepingtiger used to be very wise and loyal and kind, but recently, not so much. He acts like he's got bees in his brain... Like Goosefeather. Maybe from old age? I'm just very confused with it :( Also, Nightclan is supposed to be the "fierce " clan. How can it be the fierce clan if we only focus on Moonclan? It seems recently, as I am not sure of past events, everything major has to have Moonclan in it. Sunclan and Nightclan are lacking some parts, and I wouldn't want the plot to be messed up.
Reply Tangy
7:23 PM on June 5, 2015 
Would you guys be okay with Jaystar willingly stepping down and supporting Weepingtiger's leadership...? It could the help the plot. Moonclan would be more willing to agree due to the fact that their leader even agrees with it? To my understanding, this plot can still have some changes made to it. I just don't think not killing Jaystar would do much. I feel if she willingly steps down, it can make another reason for Moonclan to agree with Weepingtiger. Also, I was just curious, wouldn't it make more sense for the leaders to be held prisoner? If a Medicine Cat was to kill/get the Warriors to slaughter the leader, wouldn't that scare the cats a little? Medicine Cats represent peace, so why would one even attempt to kill their leader
Reply Halo
7:27 PM on June 5, 2015 
Personally loving this dark mark in MoonClans history, cats change and people change. Even Clans (for periods of time XD). Maybe to put more emphasis on all four Clans there could be a total unification of NightClan and SunClan... One leader, One clan. At first it wouldn't work, with NightClan immediately assuming the dominant role, but in the end they work together to overthrow Weepingtiger. Or too cliche? I remember it from a book somewhere... XD
Reply L
8:09 PM on June 5, 2015 
All right, I'm trying to get through this as thoroughly as I can without much rambling.

First off. The whole point of this plot is to do something a little unconventional, untraditional, and interesting. I've seen plenty of people talk about how they get bored of roleplaying on the site. The only way to fix that is to do something different, that the old members haven't seen before either so no one gets bored of running cliche scenes.

Main plots can rarely completely involve all of the clans at the same time. Often, the main clans are MoonClan and NightClan just because of their conflict, but the sickness plot provided a major focus on NightClan. They've been the center of a lot of plots. So, I'd say SunClan is the only one getting the short end of the stick.

StarClan never actually does anything other than give lives. Otherwise, I'm sure they would have destroyed NightClan the first time they started a battle at the Gathering. The perception of StarClan's actions is all that we really see in the

Now to the main part. Weepingtiger does his job well, he is completely devoted to StarClan and it is perfectly within his character to misinterpret what he sees as signs from them. If a leader goes against his suggestions, when he believes he is speaking StarClan's word, he will believe the leader is unfit to lead. Is he a nice cat? No. But he hasn't done anything to warrant his clan's disfavor because he does his job well. What the clan will see, is the medicine cats being correct over and over again while the leadership appears to be constantly in the wrong. When people are suffering, in real life, they're more accepting of extreme leadership because it promises change. That doesn't mean they're right, but it's group think, and the best villains are the ones who think they're doing the right thing. Villains don't have to be caricatures, blood thirsty creatures murdering everyone in their path just 'because'. Having a cause, especially a deeply seated religious one, leads people to do things that are wrong in the name of what is right. MoonClan is an extremely prideful clan, and as they are the closest to StarClan, they are the most likely to believe that what the medicine cat says is the truth and not question the change. MoonClan once had a medicine cat who ran out the leader, so the plot, although extreme, is not out of their personality. Remember that all of the characters are people (well more cats ;)) and they can make mistakes, in fact it's guaranteed that they will.
Reply Whiteflower
10:15 PM on June 5, 2015 
Okay, I'm not sure that this idea will help anything, but what if we had a group of cats who showed resistance? These cats could leave the clan, camp out in the loner forest, and try to figure out how to get things back to normal. I know (just a dumb example from one of my cats) that Brackenwing wouldn't agree with Weepingtiger taking charge, and I'm sure there's other cats who wouldn't agree as well. I don't know if this is possible, but then perhaps the rebel group could drag another clan into it, like Nightclan. That could keep all the clans included and give them something to bicker about. I don't know if you guys think that could happen or not, but yeah.
Reply Airmid
10:24 PM on June 5, 2015 
Can I ask how this is all going to end and what's going to happen to those cats?

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