Warrior Cats
 of the Forest

Subtitle

News

Plot Planning

Posted by Ember on December 15, 2016 at 12:10 AM

Hello everyone! If you haven’t already, please read over the Planned Events section at the top of the History Page.

The most contentious issue in the planned plot is whether or not to have a substantial portion of NightClan’s population neutered and, if we decide to go with that plot, how they should respond. Henry and I have been going back and forth on this on the last plot blog entry, so if you haven’t yet it’s a good idea to read over the last few pages of it so you know where the current discussion stands and can offer your thoughts on what would be the most interesting and realistic direction for the plot to head.

As well, how do you feel about the rest of the plot?

Over the past few days I’ve noticed that there hasn’t been much tension in SunClan surrounding Jaguargaze and Icestar and while I suspect that’s more a result of how busy this time of year is, I’d like to hear your thoughts on the SunClan schism. Will your characters actually be split between the two, or would you feel like you’re forcing conflict where there is none?

 

Categories: Other

Post a Comment

Oops!

Oops, you forgot something.

Oops!

The words you entered did not match the given text. Please try again.

You must be a member to comment on this page. Sign In or Register

107 Comments

Reply Averyiator
4:29 PM on December 27, 2016 
@Berrysong Okay
Reply L
9:00 PM on December 27, 2016 
We should probably work out when and how the NightClan cats are going to get captured and run out of their camp. Is there a certain day that works best for everyone?
Reply Berrysong7
9:07 PM on December 27, 2016 
School will be starting for me next week (I think) so weekends would be best, but that's just me.
Reply Ember
11:07 AM on December 28, 2016 
How about the weekend starting on the 6th?
Reply L
1:03 PM on December 28, 2016 
That weekend works for me.
Reply Silverwind (busy)
1:09 PM on December 28, 2016 
I'm good with whenever. :)
Reply Averyiator
1:35 PM on December 28, 2016 
Like Silverwind, any time is good. Also, I offer Fallingfire as a NightClan cat to be captured.
Reply Silverwind (busy)
1:56 PM on December 28, 2016 
@Ember, in SunClan, with Antpaw. I am a little unsure what to have Jaguargaze do at the moment. Right now he is a bit irritable and I wouldn't want him doing anything too rash. But on the other hand, I would think that Antpaw would be open for some reprimanding? At least so far as to warn him not to cross the border again, after they escort him back to DawnClan's camp? Then they would just let Lightningstar take over; however, he would likely say something about controlling the apprentices a little little better, possibly statimg some sort of incompetence. That would surely cause a ruckus, some tension, which is something we want between DawnClan anf SunClan, correct? But I wouldn't want it to explode into a skirmsh or something. Even just strong verbal exchanges. Or would that be something that's actually good for the plot?

I am just putting out ideas and trying to figure out what exactly I should have Jaguargaze do. He does believe in the "Clan before the individual", but he is currently having some personal issues, involving his sister and Horus, which he is trying to look out for his sister, as well as the good of the clan. He is a little conflicted and might need some advising to stay on the right track.
Reply Berrysong7
2:09 PM on December 28, 2016 
Okay, that's cool with me. Also, with Avery's new cat Charmer tom (I forgot his name again), we could go somewhere with the neutering thing, but what do we want to do? He could be the reason that DawnClan finds out about the newly infertile shecats. I mean, obviously Charming would be trying so so so so so hard to get one of the infertile pregnant.
Reply Averyiator
7:08 PM on December 28, 2016 
@Berrysong XD, yes he would. He would get pretty mad when they didn't become pregnant.
Reply Berrysong7
9:23 PM on December 28, 2016 
Plus, it seems like he'll do his thing anywhere, by borders included. Someone could spot him doing his thing to some NightClan shecat, and become suspicious to see him try to do it again and the shecat doesn't become pregnant. Again, just throwing out ideas.
Reply Ember
9:35 PM on December 28, 2016 
Silver, I don?t have a specific plan in mind for Antpaw, so you can do whatever feels natural. Having Jaguargaze be snippety with Lightningstar would be great and if an actual skirmish breaks out, all the better. I can have Scorchedwings come along if you?d like, as well.
Reply Averyiator
10:55 AM on December 29, 2016 
@Berrysong I'll have Sunfleck see Flamingstride continuously trying and failing to get Fallingfire pregnant.
Reply Berrysong7
3:01 PM on December 29, 2016 
I think that will work. Ember, what's your opinion on this?
Reply Ember
11:33 PM on December 29, 2016 
I think that Flamingstride has a bit of an odd fixation, but you do you, Flamingstride. The plan itself is fine. I should have a chance to update the planned events section tomorrow or the next day, so I can stitch all this together then.
Reply Berrysong7
1:19 PM on December 30, 2016 
Okay then! I don't think I'll contribute anymore to that part of the plot, but when do we plan to have that battle over territory between MoonClan, and DawnClan? I forgot if NightClan would be participating or not. What should we have happen in MoonClan and SunClan besides them being loose allies?
Reply Ember
7:08 PM on December 31, 2016 
Hey guys, I just updated the history page, including the plot planning section. I feel like I'm missing something, so if you spot anything that I have wrong, please speak up :)
Reply Silverwind (busy)
7:18 PM on December 31, 2016 
In the second to last paragraph, the last sentence, it says "rightful leader of DawnClan", when referring to Jaguargaze. That was the only thing that I saw that seemed off. Other than that everything looked okay :)
Reply Ember
9:53 PM on December 31, 2016 
Hah, thanks for catching that! Just fixed it :)
Reply Raven
11:33 AM on January 2, 2017 
I volunteer Brokenpaw (going to become nightclan med cat apprentice) to be kidnapped even though it won't really affect her :D.

Oops! This site has expired.

If you are the site owner, please renew your premium subscription or contact support.