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Isolation Plot Planning II

Posted by Ember on June 5, 2016 at 1:35 AM

Hey guys! In the last two Plot Planning Pages we’ve discussed a lot of good ideas, however we haven’t decided how these ideas will fit together into a one story line:

Two-legs may begin poisoning prey, which the clans mistake for planned attacks by enemy clans.

Blackpine will be killed by Seraphgaze, prompting Lionstar to seek revenge. However, he does not want to be seen openly attacking and orders his warriors to stalk along the border and look for discreet ways to undermine DawnClan’s security. While walking along the border, the NightClan patrol discovers a small fire caused by a cigarettes thrown from a car and help fuel the fire before returning to their territory.

The fire plot is related to potentially polluting the river, but he ash itself wouldn't be the main polluter, as the fire would stay relatively small and not burn down whole trees, mainly lower-growing plants and leaf litter. We can just use it to cause an algal bloom, then the resulting fallout from that. We can exaggerate the following fish kill, which NightClan could use to their advantage, even if it’s a consequence they didn't originally expect. As well, ideas have been thrown about involving NightClan polluting the water in other ways, possibly with two-leg trash or even with the bodies of other dead cats and prey.

Riversoul and Alienfish brought up the possibility of clans bringing in spies, possibly beginning with apprentices in meetings and later escalating to clans sending in cats pretending to be changing clans. As these spies are found, a witch-hunt may begin among the clans as they attempt to root out other potential spies among cats who had recently joined the camp.

Toxic and I have also been tossing back and forth a few ideas of where to carry this plot, focusing on SunClan:

SunClan can become a scapegoat for the apprentices meeting up and the other problems that have been occurring between the clans, a sentiment that will be particularly strong in NightClan. Today, Lightningdance and Leopard-dance took their kits to the Gathering Clearing to show them to their friend, Nightfall. Hel, a SunClanner, caused accidentally caused their three kits to die. A fight broke out, witnessed by Darkstar and a SunClan patrol originally sent to bring back Aloepaw. Lionstar hears of the kits’ death and decides to pin some additional murders on SunClan and may try and convince MoonClan and DawnClan to put SunClan “back in its place”. This acts as a departure from total isolation, however we can approach the alliance as only temporary.

The three clans can attack SunClan, which will force their leadership to crack down on their members to ensure the other clans can’t pin any more trouble on the SunClan. At the most dramatic, this could entail both Darkstar and Zenithrose being killed and a tyrannical cat taking control, or we can take a more moderate approach by having the existing leadership begin to very strictly enforce rules to keep their cats in line. Halo, Command, would you be willing to have your characters removed from their positions or dramatically change their leadership style?

So, we need to decide how to stitch this all into a coherent plot and build a rough time-line for everything. As summer has started and most of our members will be on vacation, I expect a jump in activity over the next few months, so we should be keeping the plot moving fairly quickly to keep everything interesting, but still slowly enough to allow room for side plots.

 

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288 Comments

Reply Gray
6:23 PM on July 21, 2016 
Traditionalists: Tenorwillow,Belugasplash
Nationalists: Purepaw
Reply Berrysong7
10:27 PM on July 21, 2016 
Ember says...
We already have characters set up for this first wave of spies, but she could fit in well for the next one. Maybe she could be among the first MoonClanners sent to DawnClan?



That would be great! She would fit right in, plus the fact that she has friends there. Though I guess the friendship might be a little twisted at this point. But still, perfect.
Reply L
11:37 PM on July 21, 2016 
(Don't mind my list keeping, it's just to help me feel organized x))

Traditionalists: Tenorwillow, Belugasplash, Riverblossom, Dawnclaw, Winterstorm, Badgersplash, Eveningrose, Orchidwillow, Maplepath, Bjorn, Oceanpaw, Alphapaw, Silverkit, Springkit

Nationalists: Skeletonfury, Lightningstrike, Thunder-rumble, Meadowbreath, Heronfrost, Brightlegacy, Floodpaw, Darkpaw, Kingdompaw, Purepaw, Tyra
Reply Henry MacArthur
12:44 AM on July 22, 2016 
You can add Bravepaw, Spookynightmare, Pinepaw, and Molasses-Strike to the Nationalist side Xd
Reply Alder
9:24 PM on July 22, 2016 
Traditionalists- Mossfields, Rippedheart, Luminouspaw, Crabpaw.
Nationalists- Lakepaw
None- Maskedpaw ( I'd like him to keep out of the conflict. He will be neutral)
Reply Alienfish
12:34 PM on July 23, 2016 
Oathkeeper is definitely on the nationalist side of the conflict, though she would not be speaking out too much about it (At least, not to start).
Reply Lilywish
1:30 PM on July 24, 2016 
Nationalists; Skeletonkey, Scarysilhouette
Traditionalists; Lynxpetal, Tsunamipaw
Reply River
8:05 AM on July 25, 2016 
Redsoul won't be a strong supporter of either side, but he doesn't like the way the Nationalists are run, so he'll support the Traditionalists.
Reply Fangchica
2:17 PM on July 25, 2016 
Uh, I need to bring Seraphwings back but once I do;
Nationalists: Seraphwings
Traditionalists: Survivingpaw
Muninn will probably join in once the situation gets more heated
Reply L
12:22 PM on July 26, 2016 
Traditionalists: Tenorwillow, Belugasplash, Riverblossom, Dawnclaw, Winterstorm, Badgersplash, Eveningrose, Orchidwillow, Mossfields, Rippedheart, Redsoul, Lynxpetal, Tsunamipaw, Luminouspaw, Crabpaw, Maplepath, Bearpaw, Oceanpaw, Survivingpaw, Alphapaw, Silverkit, and Springkit

Nationalists: Skeletonfury, Lightningstrike, Thunder-rumble, Meadowbreath, Seraphwings, Heronfrost, Brightlegacy, Oathkeeper, Floodpaw, Darkpaw, Kingdompaw, Purepaw, Tyra, Bravepaw, Spookynightmare, Pinepaw, Lakepaw, Molasses-Strike, Skeletonkey, and Scarysilhouette
Reply River
8:58 PM on July 27, 2016 
Sandfang will be a strong Nationalist.
Reply Alienfish
10:08 PM on July 28, 2016 
Perhaps, with this recent altercation between SunClan and DawnClan, it might be coming to a time for SunClan to send spies to DawnClan. Does anyone else believe this to be so?
Reply Silverwind (busy)
10:11 PM on July 28, 2016 
If so that can be a way for me to get Faminepaw to DawnClan. That'll also help with something mentioned earlier, about cats eating more than their share and not contributing to the clan. A fat, lazy cat like Faminepaw would fit that description perfectly xD
Reply Ember
12:53 AM on July 29, 2016 
I don't think we should have other spies sent out until the first MoonClan ones are discovered. As well, Faminepaw is one of the last cats they'd send away-- they'd want someone who is entirely devoted to SunClan.

If you want Faminepaw to move to DawnClan, she can just go. With Oriolewing and Riverblossom in charge, she'll be allowed in, even if it might ruffle some feathers.
Reply Lochflame
3:19 AM on July 29, 2016 
Hey, so what's happened with the moonclan spies? Have the Nightclan ones settled in? I have been inactive ;-;
Reply Silverwind (busy)
7:04 AM on July 29, 2016 
Faminepaw wouldn't move on her own. SunClan would have to send her away for her to leave. They could maybe lie to her and say that is why they sent her, and one or two true spies, and then they don't let her come back?
Reply Ember
11:55 AM on July 29, 2016 
The NightClan spies have already been sent out and should have been accepted into the clan.

Ah? then you might just want to find a way to get her banished, I really don?t think they?d trust her with much.
Reply River
12:00 PM on July 29, 2016 
If you wanted her banished, Riverpaw could advise Darkstar to kick her out of the clan because she's unhealthily using up too much of the clan's food supply for no one's good but her own. He's been observing her eating habits for a while now.
(That sounded way less stalker-ish in my head...)
Reply Liger
12:08 PM on July 29, 2016 
How should the MoonClan spies be discovered? Would they be caught mentioning something about MoonClan and their spying roles?
Reply Silverwind (busy)
12:23 PM on July 29, 2016 
No, I just meant they could tell her that, but in reality they were just getting rid of her. Pushing her onto DawnClan. Or would that not work? Having them lie to her. She'd likely believe it. And if there was so much as a whisper of more food she'd go in a heartbeat.

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