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Isolation Plot Planning II

Posted by Ember on June 5, 2016 at 1:35 AM

Hey guys! In the last two Plot Planning Pages we’ve discussed a lot of good ideas, however we haven’t decided how these ideas will fit together into a one story line:

Two-legs may begin poisoning prey, which the clans mistake for planned attacks by enemy clans.

Blackpine will be killed by Seraphgaze, prompting Lionstar to seek revenge. However, he does not want to be seen openly attacking and orders his warriors to stalk along the border and look for discreet ways to undermine DawnClan’s security. While walking along the border, the NightClan patrol discovers a small fire caused by a cigarettes thrown from a car and help fuel the fire before returning to their territory.

The fire plot is related to potentially polluting the river, but he ash itself wouldn't be the main polluter, as the fire would stay relatively small and not burn down whole trees, mainly lower-growing plants and leaf litter. We can just use it to cause an algal bloom, then the resulting fallout from that. We can exaggerate the following fish kill, which NightClan could use to their advantage, even if it’s a consequence they didn't originally expect. As well, ideas have been thrown about involving NightClan polluting the water in other ways, possibly with two-leg trash or even with the bodies of other dead cats and prey.

Riversoul and Alienfish brought up the possibility of clans bringing in spies, possibly beginning with apprentices in meetings and later escalating to clans sending in cats pretending to be changing clans. As these spies are found, a witch-hunt may begin among the clans as they attempt to root out other potential spies among cats who had recently joined the camp.

Toxic and I have also been tossing back and forth a few ideas of where to carry this plot, focusing on SunClan:

SunClan can become a scapegoat for the apprentices meeting up and the other problems that have been occurring between the clans, a sentiment that will be particularly strong in NightClan. Today, Lightningdance and Leopard-dance took their kits to the Gathering Clearing to show them to their friend, Nightfall. Hel, a SunClanner, caused accidentally caused their three kits to die. A fight broke out, witnessed by Darkstar and a SunClan patrol originally sent to bring back Aloepaw. Lionstar hears of the kits’ death and decides to pin some additional murders on SunClan and may try and convince MoonClan and DawnClan to put SunClan “back in its place”. This acts as a departure from total isolation, however we can approach the alliance as only temporary.

The three clans can attack SunClan, which will force their leadership to crack down on their members to ensure the other clans can’t pin any more trouble on the SunClan. At the most dramatic, this could entail both Darkstar and Zenithrose being killed and a tyrannical cat taking control, or we can take a more moderate approach by having the existing leadership begin to very strictly enforce rules to keep their cats in line. Halo, Command, would you be willing to have your characters removed from their positions or dramatically change their leadership style?

So, we need to decide how to stitch this all into a coherent plot and build a rough time-line for everything. As summer has started and most of our members will be on vacation, I expect a jump in activity over the next few months, so we should be keeping the plot moving fairly quickly to keep everything interesting, but still slowly enough to allow room for side plots.

 

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288 Comments

Reply Lochflame
1:18 AM on July 14, 2016 
Or maybe even some of the nightclan cats could do that a a reaction to the new rules
Reply Ember
2:40 PM on July 14, 2016 
I don't think we want to add that complication to the plot, for the same reasons we don't have a fifth clan.
Reply Ember
11:50 PM on July 14, 2016 
Sharppaw and Ivyfrost can head to NightClan, while Cricketchaser and another cat can go to SunClan. Does anyone have a volunteer from MoonClan?
Reply Flower
1:08 AM on July 15, 2016 
I have Spottedpaw from Moonclan
Reply Lochflame
3:22 AM on July 15, 2016 
When is the spies happening? Idk whats happening, i have been in the other clans xD
Reply Liger
9:55 AM on July 15, 2016 
Should Ivy and Sharp head out asap?
Reply Lochflame
10:13 AM on July 15, 2016 
Exactly what I was thinking.
Reply Ember
10:44 AM on July 15, 2016 
Aspenstar hasn't returned yet to announce his decision about the spies, so they should hold off until they're actually sent :)
Reply Fangchica
11:19 AM on July 15, 2016 
I have Lilith in Moonclan?
Reply Halo
11:34 AM on July 15, 2016 
The new Planned events section is such a blessing.
Reply River
12:59 PM on July 15, 2016 
It is very useful. Somehow I actually didn't know about some of the things in it.
Reply Ember
1:05 PM on July 15, 2016 
Sure, Lilith can join Cricketchaser to MoonClan.

I'll try and keep that section as updated as possible, but I suggest you keep checking this page :)
Reply Fangchica
8:47 PM on July 15, 2016 
Alright.

I agree with everyone else-the Planned Events page is heavensent-now if we had dates, it would be absolutely perfect XD
Reply Alienfish
9:03 PM on July 15, 2016 
I didn't realize how much had been added to the history page recently until today - very detailed and engaging! I just thought I should point that out. Thanks for the updates to that page, Ember.
Reply Ember
12:09 AM on July 16, 2016 
Welcome, guys :) I'll try to keep it up to date.

xD Dates would be nice, but considering we can't even get a hang of gatherings starting on Fridays, I think that's not gonna work out.
Reply Lochflame
11:42 PM on July 16, 2016 
Hey, is there any way to help the plot if Torn (My NC kit) gets killed? I'm not planning on keeping him around for that long.
Reply Alder
10:35 AM on July 17, 2016 
Alright so Sharp-paw and Ivyfrost can be sent to Nightclan, and Cricketchaser and Lilith can go to Sunclan. The story shouldn't be too over the top though ( telling them Aspenstar is crazy) because one cat that had showed a lot of compassion and kindness during gatherings wouldn't just up and change in personality. It might not be believable. I would just say that Aspenstar is abusing the power he has and won't listen to anyone, not his deputy. This has resulted in injuries to cats, some in critical condition. Maybe make up a story of a civil war within Moonclan.
Reply Lochflame
7:41 PM on July 17, 2016 
I was going to say like, somehow remove the scent and pretend to be a pair of travelling loners?
Reply Ember
5:10 PM on July 18, 2016 
That probably wouldn't work, at least in Cricketchaser's case. He's been around so long that someone's bound to recognize him from a patrol or gathering or something.
Reply Fangchica
7:33 PM on July 18, 2016 
Lilith was originally a rogue, and she joined not too long ago, so I think she could pass off as a rogue who joined, then decided she didn't liked Aspenstar's rule, maybe?

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