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Isolation Plot Planning II

Posted by Ember on June 5, 2016 at 1:35 AM

Hey guys! In the last two Plot Planning Pages we’ve discussed a lot of good ideas, however we haven’t decided how these ideas will fit together into a one story line:

Two-legs may begin poisoning prey, which the clans mistake for planned attacks by enemy clans.

Blackpine will be killed by Seraphgaze, prompting Lionstar to seek revenge. However, he does not want to be seen openly attacking and orders his warriors to stalk along the border and look for discreet ways to undermine DawnClan’s security. While walking along the border, the NightClan patrol discovers a small fire caused by a cigarettes thrown from a car and help fuel the fire before returning to their territory.

The fire plot is related to potentially polluting the river, but he ash itself wouldn't be the main polluter, as the fire would stay relatively small and not burn down whole trees, mainly lower-growing plants and leaf litter. We can just use it to cause an algal bloom, then the resulting fallout from that. We can exaggerate the following fish kill, which NightClan could use to their advantage, even if it’s a consequence they didn't originally expect. As well, ideas have been thrown about involving NightClan polluting the water in other ways, possibly with two-leg trash or even with the bodies of other dead cats and prey.

Riversoul and Alienfish brought up the possibility of clans bringing in spies, possibly beginning with apprentices in meetings and later escalating to clans sending in cats pretending to be changing clans. As these spies are found, a witch-hunt may begin among the clans as they attempt to root out other potential spies among cats who had recently joined the camp.

Toxic and I have also been tossing back and forth a few ideas of where to carry this plot, focusing on SunClan:

SunClan can become a scapegoat for the apprentices meeting up and the other problems that have been occurring between the clans, a sentiment that will be particularly strong in NightClan. Today, Lightningdance and Leopard-dance took their kits to the Gathering Clearing to show them to their friend, Nightfall. Hel, a SunClanner, caused accidentally caused their three kits to die. A fight broke out, witnessed by Darkstar and a SunClan patrol originally sent to bring back Aloepaw. Lionstar hears of the kits’ death and decides to pin some additional murders on SunClan and may try and convince MoonClan and DawnClan to put SunClan “back in its place”. This acts as a departure from total isolation, however we can approach the alliance as only temporary.

The three clans can attack SunClan, which will force their leadership to crack down on their members to ensure the other clans can’t pin any more trouble on the SunClan. At the most dramatic, this could entail both Darkstar and Zenithrose being killed and a tyrannical cat taking control, or we can take a more moderate approach by having the existing leadership begin to very strictly enforce rules to keep their cats in line. Halo, Command, would you be willing to have your characters removed from their positions or dramatically change their leadership style?

So, we need to decide how to stitch this all into a coherent plot and build a rough time-line for everything. As summer has started and most of our members will be on vacation, I expect a jump in activity over the next few months, so we should be keeping the plot moving fairly quickly to keep everything interesting, but still slowly enough to allow room for side plots.

 

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288 Comments

Reply Alder
6:07 AM on June 6, 2016 
What are the main goals in this arc for killing? There always seems to be some so what clans would be attacking eachother majorly in this arc?
Reply Silverwind (busy)
2:13 PM on June 6, 2016 
With the pollution/fire idea (if that is one idea combined) as mentioned, if that were to go about, how soon should cats from NightClan find the fire?
Reply Redscar
11:54 AM on June 7, 2016 
Perhaps sunclan could have a civil war?
Reply Ember
1:21 PM on June 7, 2016 
Spicy, I think it would be best if we keep alliances loose and temporary. Rather than having say, DawnClan and MoonClan against SunClan and NightClan for the entire time, we'll have clans occasionally team up to deal with threats or try and handle them themselves.

Silver, we haven't talked about it before, but I think it may be better if we hold off on the fire/river pollution arc until we have SunClan's new leadership style under control.

Anarchy, I think that's ultimately where we're headed, but for at least the next month or two, they'll be focused on remaining as unified and strict as possible.
Reply Liger
8:53 PM on June 7, 2016 
So far I'm on board with the plots currently developed, I'll see if I can toss in some ideas I can come up with :)
Reply Ember
1:10 PM on June 9, 2016 
We're going to have to change up some plans now that Poppystar is NightClan's leader, not Lionstar.
I think we may actually have a much easier time this way, since Poppystar more impulsive and violent than Liosntar was. In order to spur NightClan into attacking SunClan, I think we should have some border skirmishes and other trouble between the two clans, instead of just using the recent kits? death. These skirmishes should happen sooner rather than later, so feel free to start any trouble between NightClan and SunClan characters whenever you?d like.
Reply Alienfish
8:35 PM on June 9, 2016 
On a somewhat disconnected topic, I understand that SunClan has quite often had the lowest population of the four clans. This being fact, could a change to SunClan's base values have any chance of increasing the regular population/activity level? Perhaps if these isolationist, zero-tolerance policies that are currently being developed became a fundamental part of the clan's psyche and reputation, then the inactivity might be decreased and the population disparity might be minimized.
Reply Ember
9:55 PM on June 9, 2016 
SunClan was intended to be far more centralized and strict than its been, if we can keep it up, I think we should.
Reply Alder
7:12 AM on June 10, 2016 
I know this might be a stretch for the site , but maybe Sunclan could establish a rule the makes it so every cat must have a mate to increase the population numbers.
Reply River
12:19 PM on June 10, 2016 
That might be a bit hard to pull off, but it would be interesting, Spicy. Some sort of rule saying that you must have a mate, or atleast have kits, by the time you're X moons old. They could also have stricter, more frequent training to help build up their combat power. If they became super desperate and paranoid for more safety and insurance, they could even start training or promoting kits to apprentices one or two moons early.
Reply Ember
12:39 PM on June 10, 2016 
Since cats can't very well control how many kits they have per litter, whether they carry the litter to term, or whether they even get pregnant, mandating a specific number of kits doesn't make much sense.
Maybe instead of having a strict rule, she-cats would just be very strongly encouraged/pressured to have kits as often as they can, while queens are given more privileges or respect within the clan.
Reply Whiteflower
2:44 PM on June 10, 2016 
I like the ideas surrounding Sunclan right now, especially the social pressure for she-cats to have kits and the upcoming strict rules. Personally, I think it would be cool if this plot was more about emotional battles than word ones- lies, exaggerations, pressure, fear, all those negative necessities. It would be cool to have a war focused more on mental war than actual rip-your-face-off battles. I think that's the direction the plot is going from everybody else's comments, so I might just be repeating what somebody else already said, but still. A mini Cold War = Cool beans.
Reply River
12:07 PM on June 11, 2016 
Yeah, that would be really cool. We could have leaders and other high ranks becoming increasingly paranoid, maybe even sometimes going insane, and turning tyrannical, like we had talked about. All the lies and rumours and pressure could destroy them from the inside out, until they were driven to the point where they were just completely unstable.
Reply Alder
12:08 PM on June 11, 2016 
I agree with Evening. A widespread of mostly emotional problems I think would be better than our usual cliche type of away with battles and war. It almost seems that's what most of the history on he site is about. I do think that the rule thing could be still in play, but have jt be where a she-cat must have at least one litter/ must be impregnate once. This way it can still work without having an issue with he number of kits.
Reply Ember
12:39 PM on June 11, 2016 
Hm, we could have something even similar to the civil war type fighting that broke out surrounding Weepingstar's rule happen, for members who do enjoy the larger battles.
The paranoia should start soon, we seem to still be in a dip in the plot.
Reply River
2:20 PM on June 11, 2016 
Okay! Also, building off the earlier idea for having the leaders sending spies into the apprentice meetings, we could build the paranoia even more there. The spy apprentices could be sent in with lies about other clans or their own clan, to unnerve the other clans. They could lie about rumours about their clan attacking another clan, or their clan building up a big army to be ready to attack or defend, or they could lie about things that the other clans had said or done, to make the other clans not like those clans.
Reply Wolfie
10:35 AM on June 13, 2016 
So where is Dawnclan placed in this? Since Echostar is now back to her leadership I can do quite a bit with her. I haven't really made her on the strict route but she can be. All these deaths and such could cause her to set her warriors and other cats in line. New rules like Poppystar is setting, not as cruel though. So far Echostar doesn't want any interaction with the other clans and is not attending the next gathering obviously.
Reply Ember
3:59 PM on June 13, 2016 
Riversoul, ooh, that sounds like fun.

Wolfie, in DawnClan, instead of having a very strict rule as in NightClan and SunClan, we can focus on the conflict between the Seraphgaze?s followers and the rest of the clan, who could possibly gather around Echostar (who could be seen as a symbol of kindness/acceptance?). Echostar could accept in refugees from other clans, including the spies slipping in. When this goes wrong Seraphgaze?s group could gain more support from cats who want favor DawnClan purity in the name of keeping their clan secure, while Echostar?s followers defend her actions by saying that the risk of having spies is worth providing a home for cats chased from their former homes and that they don?t have anything to hide, anyway.
Reply Alienfish
5:50 PM on June 13, 2016 
Personally, Ember, I think that plan for DawnClan sounds perfect; it really ties the past arc to this one, and gives a contrast to SunClan's own policies, which will only become more strict as time goes on.
Reply Whiteflower
9:21 PM on June 13, 2016 
I think these plots are gonna be fun.

So let me get this straight:

Dawnclan: Seraphgaze and the Purity Scouts of the Clans vrs. Peace 'N Love Echostar. On top of that, they're going to be hating on Nightclan for the fire, algae bloom, and massive prey loss that could potentially lead to petty bickering.
I think another argument for Seraphgaze's pals could be that they don't have enough food to support the incoming cats, as the fish loss from the algae bloom could have a major impact on the food source. If we wanted, we could also have a cold newleaf that effects all the clans preywise, making food even harder to come by. I'd like to see Dawnclan challenging Sunclan in the skinniest cat contest.

Sunclan: The rules are cracking down hard and strict, led by Darkstar and Zenithrise as well as a few Head Warriors. A new system built on the fear, sorta?

Nightclan: They'll be taking the blame for the flood/nastiness, causing everybody to hate on them after they turn the others against Sunclan, right?
Besides that, I'd think it'd be fun to see them fall into plain chaos, taking on a more gang like way of life, with Poppystar as their tyrannical head.

Moonclan: Is there anything planned specifically for Moonclan?
If not, I think they should bide their time as the one stable clan, and then go in and try to 'help' all the other clans sort out their issues. They could pop a real cocky attitude and help their poor, unfortunate other clans, with an underlying greed to come out on top with the other clans' dependence on them? Sort of like a nosy, snooty neighbor.

At least, that's what I'm understanding from what I've seen on the plot planning. Correct me if I'm wrong anywhere.

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