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Isolation Plot Planning II

Posted by Ember on June 5, 2016 at 1:35 AM

Hey guys! In the last two Plot Planning Pages we’ve discussed a lot of good ideas, however we haven’t decided how these ideas will fit together into a one story line:

Two-legs may begin poisoning prey, which the clans mistake for planned attacks by enemy clans.

Blackpine will be killed by Seraphgaze, prompting Lionstar to seek revenge. However, he does not want to be seen openly attacking and orders his warriors to stalk along the border and look for discreet ways to undermine DawnClan’s security. While walking along the border, the NightClan patrol discovers a small fire caused by a cigarettes thrown from a car and help fuel the fire before returning to their territory.

The fire plot is related to potentially polluting the river, but he ash itself wouldn't be the main polluter, as the fire would stay relatively small and not burn down whole trees, mainly lower-growing plants and leaf litter. We can just use it to cause an algal bloom, then the resulting fallout from that. We can exaggerate the following fish kill, which NightClan could use to their advantage, even if it’s a consequence they didn't originally expect. As well, ideas have been thrown about involving NightClan polluting the water in other ways, possibly with two-leg trash or even with the bodies of other dead cats and prey.

Riversoul and Alienfish brought up the possibility of clans bringing in spies, possibly beginning with apprentices in meetings and later escalating to clans sending in cats pretending to be changing clans. As these spies are found, a witch-hunt may begin among the clans as they attempt to root out other potential spies among cats who had recently joined the camp.

Toxic and I have also been tossing back and forth a few ideas of where to carry this plot, focusing on SunClan:

SunClan can become a scapegoat for the apprentices meeting up and the other problems that have been occurring between the clans, a sentiment that will be particularly strong in NightClan. Today, Lightningdance and Leopard-dance took their kits to the Gathering Clearing to show them to their friend, Nightfall. Hel, a SunClanner, caused accidentally caused their three kits to die. A fight broke out, witnessed by Darkstar and a SunClan patrol originally sent to bring back Aloepaw. Lionstar hears of the kits’ death and decides to pin some additional murders on SunClan and may try and convince MoonClan and DawnClan to put SunClan “back in its place”. This acts as a departure from total isolation, however we can approach the alliance as only temporary.

The three clans can attack SunClan, which will force their leadership to crack down on their members to ensure the other clans can’t pin any more trouble on the SunClan. At the most dramatic, this could entail both Darkstar and Zenithrose being killed and a tyrannical cat taking control, or we can take a more moderate approach by having the existing leadership begin to very strictly enforce rules to keep their cats in line. Halo, Command, would you be willing to have your characters removed from their positions or dramatically change their leadership style?

So, we need to decide how to stitch this all into a coherent plot and build a rough time-line for everything. As summer has started and most of our members will be on vacation, I expect a jump in activity over the next few months, so we should be keeping the plot moving fairly quickly to keep everything interesting, but still slowly enough to allow room for side plots.

 

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288 Comments

Reply Blossom
2:19 PM on August 30, 2016 
Sure.
Reply Berrysong7
10:30 PM on August 30, 2016 
Ember says...
Okay. Would this coming weekend work for y'all to have the battle in?


It doesn't work as great for me because I'm going to be busy, but sure! We could do it. I'm fine with that.
Reply Alder
10:55 PM on August 30, 2016 
Sure! I might have my Sunclanners realize where they belong and return. Family drama will occur because Dovecloud had been banished, but I'm really keen on trying to keep them in Sunclan. Also- I think we should make a new plot planning page xD this ones kinda long
Reply Ember
10:59 PM on August 30, 2016 
I was planning on making another plot planning page when this one got pushed off the recent news area, but I can make one sooner, if y'all'd like?
Reply Lochflame
11:26 PM on August 30, 2016 
Yeah, this one's getting a bit clogged. Only make one if its not too hard on you though ember.
Reply River
8:58 AM on August 31, 2016 
Yeah, this one's getting a bit full... We're almost at 300...
Reply L
9:17 AM on August 31, 2016 
Making a new one will also allow us to summarize the current plot, so new members won't have to read through pages of comments to figure out where we're at in the planning.
Reply Ember
2:16 PM on August 31, 2016 
There we go :)

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