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Isolation Plot Planning II

Posted by Ember on June 5, 2016 at 1:35 AM

Hey guys! In the last two Plot Planning Pages we’ve discussed a lot of good ideas, however we haven’t decided how these ideas will fit together into a one story line:

Two-legs may begin poisoning prey, which the clans mistake for planned attacks by enemy clans.

Blackpine will be killed by Seraphgaze, prompting Lionstar to seek revenge. However, he does not want to be seen openly attacking and orders his warriors to stalk along the border and look for discreet ways to undermine DawnClan’s security. While walking along the border, the NightClan patrol discovers a small fire caused by a cigarettes thrown from a car and help fuel the fire before returning to their territory.

The fire plot is related to potentially polluting the river, but he ash itself wouldn't be the main polluter, as the fire would stay relatively small and not burn down whole trees, mainly lower-growing plants and leaf litter. We can just use it to cause an algal bloom, then the resulting fallout from that. We can exaggerate the following fish kill, which NightClan could use to their advantage, even if it’s a consequence they didn't originally expect. As well, ideas have been thrown about involving NightClan polluting the water in other ways, possibly with two-leg trash or even with the bodies of other dead cats and prey.

Riversoul and Alienfish brought up the possibility of clans bringing in spies, possibly beginning with apprentices in meetings and later escalating to clans sending in cats pretending to be changing clans. As these spies are found, a witch-hunt may begin among the clans as they attempt to root out other potential spies among cats who had recently joined the camp.

Toxic and I have also been tossing back and forth a few ideas of where to carry this plot, focusing on SunClan:

SunClan can become a scapegoat for the apprentices meeting up and the other problems that have been occurring between the clans, a sentiment that will be particularly strong in NightClan. Today, Lightningdance and Leopard-dance took their kits to the Gathering Clearing to show them to their friend, Nightfall. Hel, a SunClanner, caused accidentally caused their three kits to die. A fight broke out, witnessed by Darkstar and a SunClan patrol originally sent to bring back Aloepaw. Lionstar hears of the kits’ death and decides to pin some additional murders on SunClan and may try and convince MoonClan and DawnClan to put SunClan “back in its place”. This acts as a departure from total isolation, however we can approach the alliance as only temporary.

The three clans can attack SunClan, which will force their leadership to crack down on their members to ensure the other clans can’t pin any more trouble on the SunClan. At the most dramatic, this could entail both Darkstar and Zenithrose being killed and a tyrannical cat taking control, or we can take a more moderate approach by having the existing leadership begin to very strictly enforce rules to keep their cats in line. Halo, Command, would you be willing to have your characters removed from their positions or dramatically change their leadership style?

So, we need to decide how to stitch this all into a coherent plot and build a rough time-line for everything. As summer has started and most of our members will be on vacation, I expect a jump in activity over the next few months, so we should be keeping the plot moving fairly quickly to keep everything interesting, but still slowly enough to allow room for side plots.

 

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288 Comments

Reply Blossom
10:36 PM on August 27, 2016 
@Alienfish
The cure is for Mambaflurry's kits to move out when they reach of age :D
(Speaking of Fadedflurry's kits...)
Anyway, I think Oriolestar should do something. I'm not sure what, but something.
Reply Lochflame
10:39 PM on August 27, 2016 
Arent they in the loner city? The twolegs were meant to be camping werent they?
Reply Blossom
10:41 PM on August 27, 2016 
I thought that the humans would feed them?
Reply Lochflame
10:47 PM on August 27, 2016 
Humans dont tend to camp in the city. The cats could steal food from the camp site, and/or the humans could share a bit.
Reply Blossom
10:52 PM on August 27, 2016 
Humans could be living in the city? They could come out and leave dishes of cat food and water.
Reply Lochflame
11:01 PM on August 27, 2016 
we could do that
Reply Ember
1:17 AM on August 28, 2016 
I don't think it would make sense for the DawnClanners to go all the way to the city, though, maybe just having some campers in the loner forest outside of the territory might work best?
Reply Lochflame
2:06 AM on August 28, 2016 
Yeah, as the original idea said. I think i'll poof covepaw there xD
Reply Alienfish
8:52 AM on August 28, 2016 
What are the plans regarding the future of Darkstar and Littlepaw's imprisonment?
Reply Blossom
9:41 AM on August 28, 2016 
Good idea, I'll tell Silver
Reply Lochflame
3:34 AM on August 29, 2016 
Because in the Planned events page it says "NightClan patrols will begin to hunt outside their territory" or something lik that, are we allowed to just let our cats from NC cross borders to hunt, or are there specific dates for when this will occur?
Reply Ember
8:56 AM on August 29, 2016 
Alien, do you want Darkstar to return to the leader position, or be killed, or..? /// Loch, you can have your characters causing whatever trouble you want, whenever you want-- we really need to get that plot off of its feet, since NightClan had been so stagnant lately :)
Reply Lochflame
10:06 AM on August 29, 2016 
I'll get Spikeback to cause some trouble. Anyone wanna join a patrol with him? I dunno what clan he will torment yet though.
Reply Blossom
11:56 AM on August 29, 2016 
Any ideas for Oriolestar?
Reply Alienfish
3:47 PM on August 29, 2016 
@Ember: He could be killed, or he could return to SunClan and immediately step down from the position when he sees that Icedawn appears to be the leader that SunClan needs, more so than him. I don't think he needs to keep kicking around in the position - his place there is done, and to allow him to stay as leader would probably hold back the plot.

@Blossom: Perhaps Oriolestar could begin taking action against the nationalists, citing that their vocal activism is creating an unsafe atmosphere for the clan and impinging upon her ability to govern? I'm not sure what these actions might constitute, but it's a possibility.
Reply Ember
4:02 PM on August 29, 2016 
Rather than having more focus on Oriolestar, we can start moving things in DawnClan generally either by having one of the spies discovered or having MoonClan find out about the traditionalists stealing prey from their territory. Which should happen first?
Reply L
6:11 PM on August 29, 2016 
I think MoonClan should find out about the hunting in their territory first, as discovering spies would likely dissuade the traditionalists from crossing borders.
Reply Ember
10:53 PM on August 29, 2016 
Okay. Would this coming weekend work for y'all to have the battle in?
Reply L
11:02 PM on August 29, 2016 
It works for me.
Reply Lochflame
5:14 AM on August 30, 2016 
Thts fine by me

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