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Posted by Ember on October 11, 2015 at 3:50 PM

The DawnClan overthrow has already begun, MoonClan’s revolt is scheduled to begin either next weekend (October 16-18) or the following one (October 23-25). This gap will allow DawnClan to gather support and NightClan and SunClan and prevent too much from happening all at once.

In DawnClan, Clawtail has started a clan meeting to call for Dawnswallow’s removal from power because of the foxglove murders. When Dawnwallow returns to the camp, the clan will be rioting for her execution and she will be killed by her clan mates. After this, Clawtail will set up an election for the clan to vote on their next leader and deputy (Locuststrike and Sacredtears) and announce she will step down from her position when she has trained an apprentice. Lotus-star will be stepping down from her position, as she’s never been a full supporter of the medicine cat she will not be executed or run out of the clan. The kits taken from SunClan would also be returned at this point.

All of that is pretty set in stone now, as the revolt has already begun, but past that point there is still room for discussion about what can happen.

The new DawnClan leadership can send patrols to NightClan and SunClan to discuss a joint overthrow of Weepingstar. Having all the clans working together to destroy Weepingstar’s leadership will build trust that will help our next arc, as well as provide a way to have NightClan and SunClan involved in this plot.

We don’t have very many concrete details set out for how MoonClan’s overthrow will go down. We do know that that Eclipseheart and the medicine cats are loyal to Weepingstar and the leaders of the rebellion will be Geckospots and Amberstrike, who have already supported some of their supporters. This overthrow is likely to be bloodier and longer than DawnClan’s and will result in a costly internal war between the rebels and the zealots, who will be put down by combined MoonClan rebel, DawnClan, SunClan, and NightClan forces in a large battle. It’s possible that we could have a group of warriors from each clan staying in MoonClan to maintain peace while MoonClan transitions into a more stable leadership and the former zealots are integrated back into clan life.

Here are some possible options for what will be done with zealots, suggested by Angel. For all of the options, the punishments for each character or each broad category of crimes will be decided upon out of character before the actual trial, to speed things along and ensure we won’t have to be waiting for members to be online at the right time. There has been some discussion about these options in the last plot planning entry on pages 9 and 10, I suggest you check that out.

1. During a gathering, or possibly a special meeting of just the leaders and deputies, the fate of each cat will be individually chosen.

2. The leaders and deputies during the gathering or a special meeting devise a general punishment for each general crime without taking age and circumstances into account

3. The medicine cats could decide the fate of each cat during a medicine cat meeting. May help restore the medicine cats’ image as impartial peacekeepers.

4. The medicine cats devise a general punishment for each general crime without taking age and circumstances into account.

5. The medicine cats or leaders decide on a blanket pardon for all crimes on the possible basis that enough blood has been spilled and there is no reason to cause more strife.

6. The medicine cats or leaders could decide to strip all zealots of certain rights, such as making it impossible for them to hold a position of authority within the clan or being lowered to the status of an apprentice.

What do y’all think would be the best option for handling the zealots? How much and how should SunClan and NightClan get involved in the conflict? Should they send warriors to stay in MoonClan for an extended period of time to help the transition? What about in DawnClan? Should the kits taken from SunClan and NightClan be integrated into this at all? Would MoonClan and DawnClan as a whole face any punishment for their actions, alongside individual warriors? I could see NightClan demanding a share of their territory.

 

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145 Comments

Reply Henry MacArthur
10:34 PM on October 11, 2015 
I'm pretty the new leaders of Dawnclan and Moonclan would be rather against the idea of giving the Medicine Cat's a spot of power so early, or at least I know Locustsrike would be. After Weepingtiger and Dawnswallow are gone the tension toward any Medicine Cats holding some authority again would be very shifty.
Reply Ripple
12:01 AM on October 12, 2015 
I vote 1 be miscible with 6. The Enforcers should be exiled and the rest demoted.
Reply Redscar
4:15 PM on October 12, 2015 
I have a idea. In the old days, defeated leaders would be paraded grounded to be humiliated. Could that happen to Weepingstar?
Reply L
6:40 PM on October 12, 2015 
Anything can happen with his body after the battle but Gecko and Amber don't seem the type to allow something like that.
Reply Queen of Warrior Cats
4:56 PM on October 13, 2015 
I think that the Enforcers should be exhiled. Think about it: Tigerclaw from the series was exiled, and he tried to kill the Leader. For Apprentice Enforcers, I think the Clan should vote if they are exiled or stay. And for supporters of Dawnswallow, should be stripped of their duties; if bad enough, exiled. That's my ideas, anyway.
Reply OwlFae
6:03 PM on October 13, 2015 
maybe there can be a certain grave area made for weepingtiger and other cruel/evil cats? it gives opportunity for a new landmark (and a creepy one at that) and it also keeps their bodies away from the bodies of the good clan cats?
Reply Queen of Warrior Cats
11:07 AM on October 14, 2015 
OwlFae says...
maybe there can be a certain grave area made for weepingtiger and other cruel/evil cats? it gives opportunity for a new landmark (and a creepy one at that) and it also keeps their bodies away from the bodies of the good clan cats?

Yeah. That'd be pretty cool, and a reminder of what had happened, like Jayfeather's marks on the stick.
Reply Amberstrike1019
3:12 PM on October 14, 2015 
We could make a new requirement for apprentice training in MoonClan and DawnClan. Say all apprentices are required to visit the grave sites of Weepingtiger and/or Dawnswallow, and be told the story of what had happened. Just an idea. :D
Reply Ember
10:00 PM on October 14, 2015 
We could make it a more general requirement for all medicine cat apprentices to be taught the history of the clans and visit major landmarks?
Where was Dawnswallow buried? Hawk's Tree?

Most of the prominent leaders or other cats are buried at Hawk's Tree (it got its name from having Hawkstar and Silverstar buried there) since it's at such a central place and can serve as a reminder for all of the clans. We could make a new location, but where would we put it?
Reply OwlFae
10:15 PM on October 14, 2015 
perhaps in the burnt woods? creepy enough place. also yeah i like the idea of there being more history involved in training, making it more of a full education than just training for war, providing and healing.
Reply Ripple
12:32 AM on October 15, 2015 
We could keep it traditionally simple by having the elders recount the story through the generations.
In addition, I would suggest leaving their bodies at the Moonstone. Not burying them exactly, but leaving them so the bones can be viewed by future medicine cats (and their apprentices) as a specific reminder.
Reply Hickory
6:54 AM on October 15, 2015 
1 and 6 seem good with me, but then again, anything is fine xD
Reply 🎄SnowWolf🎄
7:06 AM on October 15, 2015 
Ember says...
We could make it a more general requirement for all medicine cat apprentices to be taught the history of the clans and visit major landmarks?
Where was Dawnswallow buried? Hawk's Tree?

Most of the prominent leaders or other cats are buried at Hawk's Tree (it got its name from having Hawkstar and Silverstar buried there) since it's at such a central place and can serve as a reminder for all of the clans. We could make a new location, but where would we put it?



Yeah, Dawnswallow should be buried somewhere else since she made a bad impact on the clans XD Maybe she can get buried somewhere close to Hawk's Tree but not directly at Hawk's Tree? Then maybe while the clans are going there for Gatherings, they can be reminded of what happened from Dawnswallow's bad choices, and they would try not to make any bad choices like her at the Gathering? I don't know, just a suggestion.
Reply Halo
7:27 AM on October 15, 2015 
I like the idea of burying her in the Burnt Woods, perhaps just on the river back nearest to Hawks Tree. The story of the medicine cat uprising will probably not die out ever, and so I don't believe there has to be a special reminder made of their graves. Although of course, it would be nice if the place were visitable. In fact, where is the Burnt Woods Role-played? In the clans territory that owns it at the time?
Reply Lauren
11:23 AM on October 15, 2015 
Sorry guys for the disappearance! I've been studying and working nonstop for the past two weeks. Midterms are finally over :3 Can anyone catch me up on what's been happening? XD
Reply Redscar
12:22 PM on October 15, 2015 
I like Ripples idea of having their bodies by the moonstone as a reminder.
Reply Queen of Warrior Cats
1:04 PM on October 15, 2015 
Wolf-flower says...
Yeah, Dawnswallow should be buried somewhere else since she made a bad impact on the clans XD Maybe she can get buried somewhere close to Hawk's Tree but not directly at Hawk's Tree? Then maybe while the clans are going there for Gatherings, they can be reminded of what happened from Dawnswallow's bad choices, and they would try not to make any bad choices like her at the Gathering? I don't know, just a suggestion.

Yeah. That would be pretty cool, I think the Medicine Cat Apprentice should visit it like Ember said. Not exactly at Hawk's Tree, but near if. To be honest, seeing the dead bodies might drive the Apprentices to something along the lines of suicide: Would YOU feel comfortable seeing a dead body? As for Weepingstar's body, it could be at a burial mound that regular Apprentices visit. I know he was originally a Medicine Cat who grew to be Leader, but what if they become a Leader and decide to do something like that to strengthen their hold on the Clan? Sorry if this offends anybody, I just would like my opinion to be heard.
Reply OwlFae
2:57 PM on October 15, 2015 
i dont think that it would be realistic at all for an apprentice to kill themselves just bc they saw a bunch of bones, but i agree that the bones shouldnt be left out either, but maybe just the skulls could be left out? that seems real creepy and cool, but still shows what happens why you get power hungry?
Reply Queen of Warrior Cats
3:15 PM on October 15, 2015 
I originally meant the whole body, but that makes sense now. Pardon my idiotic head.
Reply Ripple
3:48 PM on October 15, 2015 
Visiting a mound of dirt won't be all that intimidating, even when they know who's rotting under there. Leaving the bones out certainly has an eerie factor, but it's also dramatic, and forces them to see the result in full; without the cover of earth to hide the damage. Also, what better place for medicine cats to rest than the Moonstone?

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