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Posted by Ember on September 1, 2015 at 8:10 PM

Clawtail and Dawnswallow have begun killing off opposition by using foxglove seeds and claiming that StarClan is striking down the nonbelievers within their ranks. This will lead to their downfall when Clawtail’s infatuation with Weepingtiger leads her to reveal the plot and pin all responsibility for the deaths, and particularly one involving a cat the clan as a whole was fond of, on her mentor when she catches wind of Dawnswallow’s love for Weepingtiger.

Around this time in MoonClan, Fernwillow and Weepingtiger will come into conflict sparking violence between the moderates and extremists in the camp. In fight, Lashclaw will attack and almost kill Tigerpaw, a strong believer in StarClan, and Pricklekit, who has no faiththis  in StarClan. Lashclaw will be executed for his actions and Weepingtiger will declare that any heresy or rebellion within the camp will result in the same fate. Tigerpaw and Pricklekit will both begin to recover, but Weepingtiger will poison Tigerpaw with deathberries before his recovery sparks doubts within the clan. Pricklekit’s death and Tigerpaw’s survival will be held up as proof of StarClan’s existence and as a way to enforce extreme faith in StarClan throughout MoonClan.

Fernwillow, already upset with Weepingtiger because of their earlier conflict, will become suspicious and confront Weepingtiger. He will tell her the entire truth, expecting her to have the same blind faith in him as her other clanmates. However, she reveals what he did publicly, and forces him to flee to DawnClan.

This will result in both Dawnswallow and Weepingtiger being out of power, and the medicine cat apprentices left with fragmented support among their ranks. In MoonClan, it’s likely that there will be some internal violence between strong believers, possibly led by Clawtail, and non-believers or believers in the traditional clan structure, possibly led by Amberstrike and Geckospots.

DawnClan may be left in a less volatile situation, as they have been more moderate from the beginning. They could agree to step out of the war and return SunClan’s kits, maybe Clawtail could stay in some position of leadership as DawnClan makes a transition back to the traditional structure. However, she might have to step down from the medicine cat position when things have settled, either to being a warrior, leaving the clans, whatever feels the most appropriate.

Between the loss of MoonClan’s allies and their internal conflict, NightClan and SunClan could be able to mount a successful attack on MoonClan to win back the apprentices that had been taken. This would bring the war to an end without ending the plot entirely, new leaderships will need to be established in DawnClan and MoonClan.

So, what do y’all think should happen? I think it would be a good idea for us focus on the internal conflict in MoonClan and decide how we want to begin all of that, and I’d like to hear your opinions on DawnClan’s downfall. The fates of Weepingtiger and Dawnswallow seem pretty much settled, but everything that happens after or as a result of that is still completely up in the air. As well as that, we should decide on what’s going to be happening in SunClan and NightClan through all of this. In the last blog entry there was some support for having a SunClan-centered plot next since they have been on the edges of the main plot for a while, we can begin to set things up for them to be in an important role later on.

 

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189 Comments

Reply Flower
10:59 AM on September 21, 2015 
Okay thanks
Reply Whiteflower
7:53 PM on September 23, 2015 
So, we have developed the Dawnclan uprising plot:
After Fernwillow arrives in Dawnclan and Clawtail finds out about Weeping and Dawn's kits, Clawtail realizes she needs to take action. So she tells Fern that she found out that Dawn was killing cats with foxglove seeds, and they decide to tell the clan. When Dawn leaves camp at some point, Clawtail calls a clan meeting and tells the clan that Dawn had been killing cats, yadda yadda. She riles them up to the point that when Dawn gets back to the camp, every cat wants to see her executed. Clawtail allows Dawnswallow her final words, which Claw will tell the clan are the spewings of a mad cat, and Dawnswallow is executed on the spot by cats who lost their loved ones to the medicine cat ploy. Clawtail sets up an election, and the clan chooses their next leader. Clawtail steps back down to medicine cat, telling the clan she will step down to warrior after her apprentice is trained.
Sound good to y'all?
Reply L
8:25 PM on September 23, 2015 
@Ebony sounds good to me :)

While we're on the topic of uprisings and downfalls, I have a bit of it planned out for what can happen in MoonClan. Weepingtiger allows all of the NightClanners to return to their camp before speaking of Fernwillow's banishment, just to keep better stability in MoonClan. After that, he announces that he will be taking on the position of leader and moving Eclispestar to his deputy (as Eclipseheart again). This decision would be extremely controversial to most of the clan, whether they fully support him or not, so I was thinking a way to spark the belief that Weepingtiger has been "chosen" by StarClan is to have some sort of weather phenomenon happen while he is making the announcement. I was thinking something like a meteor shower, which could potentially be interpreted as both StarClan's satisfaction or displeasure with the current situation. Regardless, it would scare some of the members into remaining silent and not acting to prevent the murders that will continue to happen because they are afraid of StarClan's wrath being turned on them, and it will strengthen the beliefs of both the zealots and the rebels, which will ultimately lead to a very bloody and fun battle in the end :)

I also think at this time we should probably set up some sort of a plan for the downfall of the current leadership in MoonClan. My personal vote still goes towards getting NightClan involved just so it's easier for NightClan and MoonClan to repair relations and set up the new alliance between them for after this plot has concluded.
Reply Amberstrike1019
9:29 PM on September 23, 2015 
@Angel Would Eclipsestar still keep the nine lives she received, or would they somehow get taken away?
Reply Ember
10:05 PM on September 23, 2015 
I really like both ideas!
In DawnClan, what will be happening to Lotus-star when Dawnswallow is killed? She could be executed as well, or could be run out. She?s been less involved with the medicine cats than Eclipsestar, so it?s possible that she could also just step down, or start supporting the rebels?? Venom, what do you think makes the most sense for your character?
Angel, how do you think NightClan should get involved?
Reply OwlFae
10:07 PM on September 23, 2015 
@Angel also will weepingtiger appoint a new med cat apprentice before his downfall? or did lillypaw say she was staying and i just didnt see it?
Reply L
10:19 PM on September 23, 2015 
@Amberstrike I'm not sure.
@Ember The rebels realize they don't have the numbers to overthrow the current leaders without a super bloody battle that could destroy MoonClan entirely, so they go to NightClan and request their help in overthrowing Weepingtiger and the other zealots. NightClan gets their revenge and they start off on a better foot with the new leaders. This is just assuming that DawnClan would rather remain neutral.
@Owlfae the positions will be opened as they usually are. The only requirement in MoonClan is that they're loyal to Weepingtiger.
Reply Airmid
8:29 AM on September 24, 2015 
I'd kinda prefer not to see Lotus killed, but maybe if it's absolutely necessary we can run her out or kill her. I'd prefer to have her support the rebels though, and step down definitely.
Reply OwlFae
2:40 PM on September 24, 2015 
ooo buddying up with nightclan, cant wait to see how sassmaster phantom and sassmaster gecko interact
Reply L
9:03 PM on September 24, 2015 
Ragingwar would greatly appreciate it as well if Lotus-star doesn't get executed or exiled xD
She has never really been in complete support of the medicine cats. That should score her some points?
Reply Fangchica
12:30 PM on September 27, 2015 
@Raze @Amberstrike Wouldn't Eclipseheart technically keep her lives, like in the case of one of the books, I believe it was Tigerstar who was demoted, but his lives weren't able to be taken away?Actually, Weepingtiger could always try and deal a certain amount of fatal blows without creating a horrible certain death wound to take away all but one life....

Also, I had planned on Eclipseheart just being oblivious to the wrongdoings of Weepingtiger, and continue to follow simply because of her faith in Starclan and medicine cats, is that ok with everyone?
Reply Amberstrike1019
3:22 PM on September 28, 2015 
@Fangchica No... Tigerstar was killed by Scourge while he was the leader of ShadowClan, and he was never the leader of ThunderClan, so... We've got no idea what the canon would be for that kind of situation. Also, the leader before Bluestar left ThunderClan to become a kittypet, but he was already on his last life. :P Edit: All of Tigerstar's nine lives were taken away by Scourge's one strike.
Reply L
3:58 PM on September 28, 2015 
@Fangchica She could give her lives back to StarClan. Mirestar gave up his remaining lives there. I don't know of any other leader that has done it so that'd probably be the cleanest way to do it. Since she's going to be loyal though, Weepingstar wouldn't ask her to give up her lives.
Reply Fangchica
7:11 PM on September 28, 2015 
I see, ok
Reply Twin Devils
12:53 AM on September 29, 2015 
I like the idea of NightClan and the rebels buddying up. And as OwlFae put it "sassmaster phantom and sassmaster gecko interacting" would be great.
Reply L
9:21 AM on September 30, 2015 
So, at the moment, Fernwillow's return isn't really included in the plot anywhere, so maybe, when the rebels go to NightClan for assistance, DawnClan is also willing to send some warriors to help out the cause? The Warriors could all just volunteer for the attack so it doesn't create a lot of controversy in the clan. It would get Fernwillow back into MoonClan and it would make the end battle a little less devastating because it could end more quickly.
Reply Ember
11:16 PM on September 30, 2015 
Storm, having Lotus teaming up with the rebels would work, we just have to make certain that she isn?t acting as a leader within their ranks so Locuststrike and Sacredtears have a graceful transition to leader and deputy after the revolt. As Angel said, she can just give back her lives, we?ve had precedent for that before in this roleplay, even if it isn?t canon.
Oooh, Phantom and Gecko together does sound like a party. Do you guys think we could have SunClan involved in this too? It seems odd to have three involved and not all four, even if SunClan tends to try and stay out of conflicts. Quickstar was talking about making an alliance with DawnClan earlier, we could possibly have SunClan provide some support for DawnClan after things blow over there? Even if their position would be ?if MoonClan attacks and tries to turn you back to the medicine cat rule, we?ll back you up? I think it would be better than them just sticking to themselves??
I like that idea Angel. It seems like DawnClan?s going to revolt before MoonClan, so we could build in a bit of a longer span between the two so DawnClan has some stability by the time MoonClan is entering the final phases of the overthrow?
Reply OwlFae
11:34 PM on September 30, 2015 
it makes sense that sunclan would wanna get in there and get a little payback along with nightclan, so perhaps the rebels can send out scouts to visit night, dawn, and sun? gecko can go to nightclan, amberstrike could have a pick between sun and dawn since the kits will be made into apprentices early in october, and wed need a volunteer to head to the other.
Reply L
11:49 PM on September 30, 2015 
I was just about to suggest the rebels seek help in SunClan too xD It would create a united effort and set us up for the next plot where all the clans are forced to work together. It'll be easier to establish that level of trust if all the leaders have already been on the same side.
Reply Lauren
12:12 AM on October 1, 2015 
So going off to what Angel was saying, Fernwillow comes back to MoonClan with some DawnClan warriors to stop Weepingstar. The two confront each other and they exchange words. An enforcer could overhear the two and murders Fernwillow. A Moonclan cat can witness the incident and help strengthen force against the clan informing Gecko over Fernwillow's death. . Fernwillow's death can be used to send a message throughout Moonclan that Weepingtiger is bloodthirsty and isn't following StarClan's orders.

That's all I have right now.

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