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Posted by Ember on September 1, 2015 at 8:10 PM

Clawtail and Dawnswallow have begun killing off opposition by using foxglove seeds and claiming that StarClan is striking down the nonbelievers within their ranks. This will lead to their downfall when Clawtail’s infatuation with Weepingtiger leads her to reveal the plot and pin all responsibility for the deaths, and particularly one involving a cat the clan as a whole was fond of, on her mentor when she catches wind of Dawnswallow’s love for Weepingtiger.

Around this time in MoonClan, Fernwillow and Weepingtiger will come into conflict sparking violence between the moderates and extremists in the camp. In fight, Lashclaw will attack and almost kill Tigerpaw, a strong believer in StarClan, and Pricklekit, who has no faiththis  in StarClan. Lashclaw will be executed for his actions and Weepingtiger will declare that any heresy or rebellion within the camp will result in the same fate. Tigerpaw and Pricklekit will both begin to recover, but Weepingtiger will poison Tigerpaw with deathberries before his recovery sparks doubts within the clan. Pricklekit’s death and Tigerpaw’s survival will be held up as proof of StarClan’s existence and as a way to enforce extreme faith in StarClan throughout MoonClan.

Fernwillow, already upset with Weepingtiger because of their earlier conflict, will become suspicious and confront Weepingtiger. He will tell her the entire truth, expecting her to have the same blind faith in him as her other clanmates. However, she reveals what he did publicly, and forces him to flee to DawnClan.

This will result in both Dawnswallow and Weepingtiger being out of power, and the medicine cat apprentices left with fragmented support among their ranks. In MoonClan, it’s likely that there will be some internal violence between strong believers, possibly led by Clawtail, and non-believers or believers in the traditional clan structure, possibly led by Amberstrike and Geckospots.

DawnClan may be left in a less volatile situation, as they have been more moderate from the beginning. They could agree to step out of the war and return SunClan’s kits, maybe Clawtail could stay in some position of leadership as DawnClan makes a transition back to the traditional structure. However, she might have to step down from the medicine cat position when things have settled, either to being a warrior, leaving the clans, whatever feels the most appropriate.

Between the loss of MoonClan’s allies and their internal conflict, NightClan and SunClan could be able to mount a successful attack on MoonClan to win back the apprentices that had been taken. This would bring the war to an end without ending the plot entirely, new leaderships will need to be established in DawnClan and MoonClan.

So, what do y’all think should happen? I think it would be a good idea for us focus on the internal conflict in MoonClan and decide how we want to begin all of that, and I’d like to hear your opinions on DawnClan’s downfall. The fates of Weepingtiger and Dawnswallow seem pretty much settled, but everything that happens after or as a result of that is still completely up in the air. As well as that, we should decide on what’s going to be happening in SunClan and NightClan through all of this. In the last blog entry there was some support for having a SunClan-centered plot next since they have been on the edges of the main plot for a while, we can begin to set things up for them to be in an important role later on.

 

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189 Comments

Reply Flower
8:50 PM on September 1, 2015 
I like the idea Ember how about in Dawnclan's downfall one cat can began to speak to cats that they think don't like the medicinecat's ruling their clan and they form an attack on Dawnswallow and her most dedicated followers with the help of Amberstrike's and Geckospot's group of rebels and re-take Dawnclan as the final step after some arguments through-out the clan just throwing the thought out there cause I think it could work
Reply Hickory
8:55 PM on September 1, 2015 
So was Ripplesong still going to be killed after speaking up against Dawnswallow? Ebony said something like that could work. I want to know what you guys think :)
Reply Fangchica
9:59 PM on September 1, 2015 
In Moonclan, among the internal disputes, what role would Eclipsetar really play? At the current moment she is having mixed feelings, but continues to support Weepingtiger, and I would like her to play some part. Maybe, some rebels and disbelievers could cone up to her, ask for a private meeting, and try to convince her, and depending on the plot, would have her not believe the cats and continue to support Weepingtiger, or have her convinced and have her help the rebels.
Reply Swan
10:12 PM on September 1, 2015 
I like Fang's idea, and I think that harmonysong, a normally really quiet but lonely cat was to go to Eclipsestar and ask her for help, tell her how she feels about the situation. She would probably say that she believed Starclan was real but she believed Starclan wanted to have respect and not to be feared. Or something like that, I think it would be interesting if Eclipsestar went against the words of Weeping
Reply Ember
10:34 PM on September 1, 2015 
I think would work out better for the plot if Eclipsestar stayed loyal to the medicine cats, even if she turned against Weepingtiger specifically. Fernwillow and her would lead the StarClan fanatics, Amberstrike and Geckospots could lead the rebels. Having Eclipsestar turn to the rebels would grant their cause more legitimacy than I feel would be best for the fanatics to be able to be too much of a threat, or it could go the opposite way and lose supporters because cats could accuse Eclipsestar of just being opportunistic and power-hungry.
Reply Hickory
10:41 PM on September 1, 2015 
Hey Ember, once Dawnclan has fully declared they are pulling away from the war, could Quickstar put his before plan in action? Quickstar is following the plan of balance, so once Dawnclan pulls out, Quickstar would probably think that would be the best time to ask for an alliance and then pull out of the war as well.
Reply Ember
10:46 PM on September 1, 2015 
He could, but that depends on what we want to have happen after this arc. It may work out better for there to be no alliances between the clans at all, or it could work out for SC to be with DC, or still with NC, or both. I do agree that it makes sense for SunClan to step away from NightClan after MoonClan backs out, but I think it's too early to say what they should do apart from that, or decide that them stepping away is something that should definitely happen.
Reply Swan
10:47 PM on September 1, 2015 
That makes sense. Anyways it was just a thought :p
Reply Hickory
10:58 PM on September 1, 2015 
Right, so simply stepping out after Dawnclan does would be okay? No alliances would mean more focus on the individual clans
Reply Ember
11:00 PM on September 1, 2015 
Maybe, it all depends on what the next plot is going to be.
I'd personally love to see MoonClan and NightClan pair up, which would also mean that DawnClan and SunClan would have to form an alliance. But after this arc, I don't know how we'd gracefully make that shift. There would be a lot of built up resentments between the two halves, even after MoonClan and NightClan are returned to their traditional structure. It might work out better for all the clans to be on their own, or for all of them to actually work together toward a common goal.
Reply Hickory
11:07 PM on September 1, 2015 
Okay :) Sounds good!
Reply OwlFae
11:09 PM on September 1, 2015 
would nightclan want an alliance with moonclan? i think after all thats happened there would definitely be some sort of lingering grudge, along with sunclan, what with all the kit stealing and what not. which perhaps would make things interesting in the next plot? if moonclan is trying to regain allies, it would be interesting to see what measures would be taken to gain those alliances after everything
Reply L
11:44 PM on September 1, 2015 
Ember, Fernwillow is the one who will be forced to flee... Not Weepingtiger? He's supposed to exile her after denying the claims that he killed the kit, since there will be no actual proof and it seems unlikely that all of his fanatics would turn on him due to a "maybe", and some would even be alright with him killing the kit if he confirmed that it was StarClan's will.
Reply Ember
8:11 AM on September 2, 2015 
Oh, sorry about that. I misread the post on the old plot planning page. Having Fernwillow change clans would help lead things, and would make sure that MoonClan had an even tougher time recovering from things.
My only concern with that is simply time, but Weepingtiger could continue to lead after he formally retires.
Reply Agnosticangel
9:18 AM on September 2, 2015 
I m completely lost
Reply Halo
9:25 AM on September 2, 2015 
I was under the impression that Dawnswallow would be executed on the spot? Otherwise I dont know where she would go if she were run out.
Reply Ember
9:31 AM on September 2, 2015 
She can be killed or run out, either works since she'll be out of power. Having her executed would be a very violent action for DawnClan to take, but considering the circumstances I don't think it would be out of character for the clan to do it, and that could cause some tension later.
Reply L
9:34 AM on September 2, 2015 
@Ember He could claim that age isn't a factor of his leadership and never formally retire, sort of like how Lichenstone carried out deputy duties as an elder? Things will probably deteriorate pretty quickly after Fernwillow goes to DawnClan, I don't think the clan will stay standing for much more than a month in its current state.

@Nighting if it doesn't work out that they execute her in DawnClan then she could flee to MoonClan? If it's too out of character for DawnClan than she could be executed in MoonClan in an attempt to save the alliance?
Reply Whiteflower
9:47 AM on September 2, 2015 
Okay, I'm good with all this! I know I'm going to need some help with Clawtail's part in this, but I think this is looking pretty fun to role play! :)

I asked Hickorytooth to use Ripplesong as the cat to be killed that's beloved by the clan. I'm willing to sacrifice Morningblossom as well. Are there any volunteers for death by Dawnswallow and Clawtail, because we need a few more cats.
Reply Riversoul
10:00 AM on September 2, 2015 
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