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Posted by Ember on June 5, 2015 at 1:15 PM

This upcoming weekend (Friday the 5th to Sunday the 7th) we have a battle scheduled, MoonClan and DawnClan will band together to carry out their first attack on NightClan, who will go to SunClan for support. The battle will be long with no clear winner, MoonClan and DawnClan will withdraw with the excuse that they have weakened NightClan enough to be able to return when their own strength has returned and destroy the clan, NightClan will claim that they were forced to flee.'


In the last plot planning blog entry Storm&Co suggested a new arc involving the leaders being overthrown that gathered quite a bit of enthusiasm. Angel and I have been throwing ideas back and forth for a bit and decided that it would be best if the current sickness plot lead directly to this, rather than ending this arc, waiting a bit, and beginning that one.

Following the battle taking place this weekend, the sickness will spread rapidly through MoonClan and DawnClan. Many more cats will fall ill, especially among those wounded in the battle. MoonClan and DawnClan leadership will begin to weaken and their clan’s criticism of them rise following a number of mistakes, openly beginning to break under stress, or perhaps saying or doing something perceived as cowardly, such as abandoning their commitment to destroying NightClan. What exactly this is should be planned for larger mistakes, but for smaller mistakes it will be up to the leaders themselves how they want their own leaders to begin to fall.

Weepingtiger will discover a plant that can be used to treat the disease and grows only in the thickest sections of DawnClan and MoonClan’s territories. He will share this knowledge with DawnClan’s medicine cats, but they will keep it secret from their enemy clans and point to the recovery of their warriors as being StarClan’s favor to their clans, and, most importantly, their medicine cats. This will place the medicine cats in a favored position among these clans, particularly in contrast to the seemingly weak leaders. Jaystar and Willowstar will make the mistake of attacking NightClan again when their warriors are still recovering, against Weepingtiger and Leorio’s public advice to wait. This will be a devastating battle for them.

Weepingtiger will capitalize on this situation to gather the support of his clan to run out or kill Jaystar, claiming to have received a prophecy from StarClan telling him to do so. His clan will support him and the new clan structure and values he proposes. The new leadership will be similar in structure to a tribe, with a combined leader and medicine cat position. To compensate for the fewer number of cats in charge that this would cause, there could be two medicine cat apprentices at a time, the medicine cat/leader would choose who would be their successor and they’d be a deputy medicine cat, or whatever title we decide to give them. They would take a very direct and important position in managing the clan, including giving periodic talks to the apprentices and warriors of the clan about StarClan and their code. These leader medicine cats will advocate for a closeness with StarClan and mandate that all clan cats worship them. They will be strict with the warrior code, even minor infractions will result in severe punishments. Stress will be placed on the birth of new kits, to strengthen their clan, as well as on apprentices and warriors spending a greater portion of their time serving the clan. Their modified code would include changes such as a rule specifying medicine cats not being allowed to have kits, that a clan cannot overthrow their leader unless both medicine cat apprentices agree and receive a sign from StarClan, that the warriors do not need to come to the aid of others, even enemy kits, because loyalty to their own clans is their greatest duty, the clans may chase out other clans who do not believe in StarClan—things like that. This new code will need to be drafted, ideas for rules to be added are greatly appreciated. The leader medicine cats will be appointed by the website owner as they will be in an even higher position of power than the current leaders.

Under this new structure, MoonClan will attack NightClan again and be more successful, or be able to successfully defeat a NightClan attack. While this will have more to do with the sickness having being eradicated from their clan while it remains strong in NightClan, Weepingtiger will pin their victory on StarClan’s approval, prompting DawnClan to fall to this new system of leadership as well.

All of this new arc is still up in the air, of course. This plan can be changed, it is just what Angel and I came up with for larger plot points, with ideas of my own to transition through these bigger plot points. It will be one of the more dramatic plots that we have had on the website, and will require a large commitment from all members to work correctly. After the plot has run its course, the new leadership will fall again and the clans will return to their traditional structure.

 

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88 Comments

Reply Riversoul
3:07 PM on June 27, 2015 
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Reply Ember
3:42 PM on June 27, 2015 
River, it seems a bit too early to be planning the exacts of how this will all fall part yet, but it will likely begin with the clan itself starting to see the medicine cats make mistakes and feeling like they?re working under tyrants. I?m not sure about the elder position being removed, in the books it always felt to me like they became elders when they could not serve the clan well by getting in the way of younger cats in hunting patrols and were more useful helping care for the kits and advising younger cats. It?s possible that the medicine cats could start stressing their importance to the clan and use them to help teach the others about StarClan, doing the basics of teaching the code. What do y?all think of it?

Nighting, Angel, and I have been tossing some ideas around. Angel suggested that Weepingtiger and Dawnswallow will send a small group of spies (2-3 cats per clan) to NightClan and SunClan along with the cats choosing to leave the clans. The spies would be informed of a battle set to take place on a specific time, say, the half-moon, in which they would go to the sick while their new clans were distracted and offer them a cure in return for total loyalty to DawnClan or MoonClan. This would give a chance for cats on both sides to swap clans while we?re still in a transition period, and kick off the first battle in this new phase of the war.
The battle itself would take place in NightClan?s camp, and MoonClan and DawnClan will win a clear victory and demand Frozenstar?s execution. This will put the medicine cats in the respected position they need to be at at this point, and ensure the full loyalty of their own clans.
Reply Airmid
4:09 PM on June 27, 2015 
Wait a moment, but if Frozenstar already knows about the cure?...
Reply Ember
4:14 PM on June 27, 2015 
They know that there is a cure, but they don't know what plant it is, and even if they did they have no access to it as it only grows in the forest.
Reply Riversoul
4:25 PM on June 27, 2015 
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Reply Lost
4:32 PM on June 27, 2015 
Lilypaw actually told Frozenstar she knew where the cure was and she could try to find someway to get the sample...
Reply Ember
5:15 PM on June 27, 2015 
Okay, that's fine. They just can't get into the territory and actually get their paws on it, if they try they will need to be caught early on by a patrol.
Reply Airmid
7:23 PM on June 27, 2015 
Aah. Okay then.
Reply L
4:03 PM on June 28, 2015 
Spies sent from MoonClan:

To SunClan:
Leader- Flarestorm
Alex
Spottedpaw

To NightClan
Leader- Fireflychaser
Stonestare
Snowyfern
Reply Ember
1:49 PM on July 3, 2015 
The battle can take place on the weekend of the 10th. This is when the gathering would normally take place, so we can push that back to the weekend of the 17th and the medicine cat meeting to the weekend of the 24th.
Reply L
8:40 PM on July 5, 2015 
Do you think we could switch the Gathering and battle weekends? The spies are just being sent out now, and I think it would be interesting to see all the tensions between the clans before the battle even takes place.
Reply Halo
12:32 PM on July 6, 2015 
Spies from DawnClan:
To NightClan:
Leader: Rosefrost
Killua
Mockingblood

To SunClan:
Leader: Raifall
Woofy
Sapphire
Reply Ember
1:59 PM on July 6, 2015 
Sure. We could put the gathering this weekend and the battle the following one, or we can push just the battle or both back.
Reply Airmid
9:31 PM on July 8, 2015 
Maybe it's just me, but I think the battle could be pushed back maybe because some people aren't exactly online , and It would be rather confusing for them to get on and realize what's going on....that's just my opinion.
Reply L
9:35 AM on July 10, 2015 
So, the Gathering is going to be this weekend?
Reply Ember
10:17 AM on July 10, 2015 
Sure, that will work out better than the battle being this weekend. So gathering this weekend, battle the following weekend, medicine cat meeting after that?
Reply L
10:32 AM on July 10, 2015 
Sounds good. So they'll be leaving this evening for the Gathering then?
Reply Ember
8:28 PM on July 10, 2015 
At this point it's probably best if they hold off until tomorrow to leave then we can have the gathering pushed back a day. I'll make a blog entry for it in a moment.
Reply L
5:40 PM on July 15, 2015 
Hey, guys, I have an idea for something that could happen after this weekend's battle takes place (that could result in NightClan and SunClan both being given the cure, or could result in even more drama)

So, after MC and DC win the battle, they offer the cure to SC and NC, but with certain terms attached. Both clans have to follow and revere StarClan, the warrior code must be followed, and whatever other changes in lifestyle the medicine cats would like to see in those clans. Warriors from both DC and MC will be left in NC and SC to monitor and judge how well the new clans are following these terms. This would last a week, until the next medicine cat meeting, at which point the NC and SC medicine cats would be given the cure, granted the warriors reported that the terms were met.

It doesn't have to work out this way, and there's definitely a lot of directions it could go off in. NC and SC could murder/ run out the warriors that are left behind to observe them, a trap could be set up at the next medicine cat meeting to take the herb by force, or anything of the like.

What do you guys think?
Reply Hickory
8:36 PM on July 15, 2015 
I like Angel's suggestion :) Can I build to it? NC would probably decline at first sight, but agree. Then one of the skies could be seen leaving the camp to show their clan what they have been doing and possibly get caught by NC.

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