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Posted by Ember on June 5, 2015 at 1:15 PM

This upcoming weekend (Friday the 5th to Sunday the 7th) we have a battle scheduled, MoonClan and DawnClan will band together to carry out their first attack on NightClan, who will go to SunClan for support. The battle will be long with no clear winner, MoonClan and DawnClan will withdraw with the excuse that they have weakened NightClan enough to be able to return when their own strength has returned and destroy the clan, NightClan will claim that they were forced to flee.'


In the last plot planning blog entry Storm&Co suggested a new arc involving the leaders being overthrown that gathered quite a bit of enthusiasm. Angel and I have been throwing ideas back and forth for a bit and decided that it would be best if the current sickness plot lead directly to this, rather than ending this arc, waiting a bit, and beginning that one.

Following the battle taking place this weekend, the sickness will spread rapidly through MoonClan and DawnClan. Many more cats will fall ill, especially among those wounded in the battle. MoonClan and DawnClan leadership will begin to weaken and their clan’s criticism of them rise following a number of mistakes, openly beginning to break under stress, or perhaps saying or doing something perceived as cowardly, such as abandoning their commitment to destroying NightClan. What exactly this is should be planned for larger mistakes, but for smaller mistakes it will be up to the leaders themselves how they want their own leaders to begin to fall.

Weepingtiger will discover a plant that can be used to treat the disease and grows only in the thickest sections of DawnClan and MoonClan’s territories. He will share this knowledge with DawnClan’s medicine cats, but they will keep it secret from their enemy clans and point to the recovery of their warriors as being StarClan’s favor to their clans, and, most importantly, their medicine cats. This will place the medicine cats in a favored position among these clans, particularly in contrast to the seemingly weak leaders. Jaystar and Willowstar will make the mistake of attacking NightClan again when their warriors are still recovering, against Weepingtiger and Leorio’s public advice to wait. This will be a devastating battle for them.

Weepingtiger will capitalize on this situation to gather the support of his clan to run out or kill Jaystar, claiming to have received a prophecy from StarClan telling him to do so. His clan will support him and the new clan structure and values he proposes. The new leadership will be similar in structure to a tribe, with a combined leader and medicine cat position. To compensate for the fewer number of cats in charge that this would cause, there could be two medicine cat apprentices at a time, the medicine cat/leader would choose who would be their successor and they’d be a deputy medicine cat, or whatever title we decide to give them. They would take a very direct and important position in managing the clan, including giving periodic talks to the apprentices and warriors of the clan about StarClan and their code. These leader medicine cats will advocate for a closeness with StarClan and mandate that all clan cats worship them. They will be strict with the warrior code, even minor infractions will result in severe punishments. Stress will be placed on the birth of new kits, to strengthen their clan, as well as on apprentices and warriors spending a greater portion of their time serving the clan. Their modified code would include changes such as a rule specifying medicine cats not being allowed to have kits, that a clan cannot overthrow their leader unless both medicine cat apprentices agree and receive a sign from StarClan, that the warriors do not need to come to the aid of others, even enemy kits, because loyalty to their own clans is their greatest duty, the clans may chase out other clans who do not believe in StarClan—things like that. This new code will need to be drafted, ideas for rules to be added are greatly appreciated. The leader medicine cats will be appointed by the website owner as they will be in an even higher position of power than the current leaders.

Under this new structure, MoonClan will attack NightClan again and be more successful, or be able to successfully defeat a NightClan attack. While this will have more to do with the sickness having being eradicated from their clan while it remains strong in NightClan, Weepingtiger will pin their victory on StarClan’s approval, prompting DawnClan to fall to this new system of leadership as well.

All of this new arc is still up in the air, of course. This plan can be changed, it is just what Angel and I came up with for larger plot points, with ideas of my own to transition through these bigger plot points. It will be one of the more dramatic plots that we have had on the website, and will require a large commitment from all members to work correctly. After the plot has run its course, the new leadership will fall again and the clans will return to their traditional structure.

 

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88 Comments

Reply Hickory
9:00 AM on June 6, 2015 
Okay @Angel, I see your point. I'm just adding in my opinion to the bunch. As a somewhat new member, I'm not aware of past opinions and such, so bringing them up would only cause confusion to me. If there is a main plot though, I just think it would be fair to at least have roles for all the clans, as we have never had a major plot that does so. As you said, roleplay for some members has become boring. By adding some script to go by, as in what the clan will do during this time period, it will provide them with something to do. However this opinion may seem, I totally understand you @Angel :)
Reply Ripple
9:37 AM on June 6, 2015 
I agree with Jay's first idea. Jaystar hasn't been a particulary bad leader, and she's popular enough with her clanmates, so I don't think MoonClan would sit by and watch her be overthrown that easily.

Maybe if Jaystar is run out of the clan, she gives her clanmates a choice to follow her. Most would stay in MoonClan, but a few could support her and leave as well. Maybe the same could be done for DawnClan(?)
Reply Silverwind (busy)
11:18 AM on June 6, 2015 
I was wondering, about the cure. I'm not saying that I have something that would absolutely work, but I was thinking that, perhaps the medicine cats could start administering more strengthening herbs to maybe help the cats fight off the illness on their own, coupled with some other combination of herbs that could possibly eliminate the illness? I'm just throwing this out there, not like it has to be done that way, but I have been reading over the herbs and what they can do, trying to match up treatments with the symptoms of this new illness. I know, I'm probably going to be called a nerd or something for looking into this as deeply as I am, but I just wanted to try and help out with this part of the plot. :)
Reply Twin Devils
1:42 PM on June 6, 2015 
Ooh, I really like this idea! I remember hashbrowning with Ember a little about something similar to this, and I fell completely in love with the idea then. I love this version of it even more!

Weepingtiger, I can totally seeing him doing something like this. I mean, you read all those history books of clergymen that went mad with power and doing things that were 'God's will' even though it clearly wasn't. I'm not sure why people think this is not possible, it seems very clear that a cat obsessed with a higher power can get a little drunk off religion. Maybe for this MoonClan 2.0, they'll begin to worship some sort of deity over StarClan or something crazy like that.

As for rules to help the culting kitties, I can only think of more isolation laws. 'Any cats who don't worship what we do are enemies', 'StarClan judges the wicked and rewards the good, so be good, or StarClan will have me kill you!', 'Be sure to give offerings to please StarClan.' I don't know about many rules, just more kind of 'duties' of the new clan.

I agree that if Jaystar willingly stepped down after mistakes and claimed to follow Weepingtiger wholly, that might make some of the cats more willing to follow all the new rulings and such.

After reading over Nightingale's post, I like the idea of SunClan possibly finding the new herbs and getting caught by DawnClan. Perhaps Goldenstar can get himself captured in order to get SunClan out of DawnClan clutches and Quickrunner reports back to Frozenstar with very vague details of what may be going on. I don't know, but it would be one way to give SunClan a little action, but it wouldn't change much of the plot. Even if NightClan accused MoonClan of using a herb rather than being in StarClan's favor, MoonClan can still say that the herb was placed in their territory for being blessed. Just an idea perhaps?
Reply L
2:00 PM on June 6, 2015 
Jaybird, if you're willing to have Jaystar step down and support Weepingtiger I have a way that the whole change will seem less hostile. Rather than the clan running her own in support of Weepingtiger they could handle matters more privately. He could claim that she needs to "learn" how to truly listen to and worship StarClan. She could then become the "deputy medicine cat" or the other apprentice and we could try to run the plot that way. This is, of course, just an idea. I feel like MoonClan would be far more accepting if the current leader isn't removed completely from power.
Reply Lost
4:00 PM on June 6, 2015 
@Angel What's going to happen to Oceancurrent? Is he going to have to step down?
Reply Ember
7:45 PM on June 6, 2015 
Whether the leaders step down and remain in the clan, are run out, or are killed can be up to the leaders? owners.
The clans have always bended the code to suit their own agendas, with how desperate things are growing for them, I can see them realistically pushing this further than they would have dared before. As well as this, the medicine cats would have the apparent favor of StarClan with their entirely new code.
I like Nightingale?s suggestion about SunClan discovering that MoonClan and NightClan have been able to find a cure for the sickness but hid it from the other clans. I think that they would tell NightClan about this and we could use that as a way to pull them into later battles, as SunClan and NightClan will need to steal the herb from MoonClan and DawnClan. It will put them in an offensive position, so we don?t have them being attacked again and again until MoonClan and DawnClan just give up. I think it?s too early to plan that out in detail, but we can have them headed roughly in that direction.
I don?t think that we should have a complete unification of SunClan and NightClan, if only so that we can have half the clans with a traditional structure. We could instead have the two clans forge a much closer alliance than they would under usual circumstances. They could have an arrangement similar to NightClan and DawnClan?s during the leadership of Jetstar and Bluestar, where both clans can freely roam on each other?s territory, pool their resources for patrols, and treat their sick together.
Rather than staying in the forest and plotting against the new leadership on their own, the rebellious cats could choose to join SunClan and NightClan, where they?ll face a higher chance of success.
Silverwind, that could be an option in NightClan and SunClan, it could help some of the sick recover. There would still be deaths as the herb that Weepingtiger discovers would be the only one to effectively treat the disease itself, and the traveling herbs would be difficult to find the amount that would be needed to administer to each cat. It could still be used in desperation by SunClan and NightClan, possibly only on their younger cats to conserve what supplies of those herbs they have?
Twin, the idea about the herb being used as a sign of StarClan?s favor would make more sense than both clans just lying about why their cats are recovering. My concern is that it would reduce SunClan?s importance, as they would not be the first to discover the herb, but that would be such a minor, short lived point that it could be done away with.
Angel suggested to me that of the three positions be organized as a medicine cat on top, their apprentice as their deputy, and the third and command being separate from the two medicine cats as a sort of head of the military. They medicine cat and their apprentice/deputy would set up the new code and rules, teach the clan, and moderate disputes, while the third and command would organize patrols, lead attacks on other plans, and carry out the medicine cats? orders and punishments. We think that this will grant the new leadership more legitimacy and help ease the transition on the clan. The medicine cat and medicine cat apprentice will be chosen for the role in the coming weeks, while the third in command ?general? would be the current leader. The current deputy would be returned to the rank of a warrior, but possibly still have a favored place with the old leader, current third in command.
Reply Airmid
8:44 AM on June 7, 2015 
Wait what'll happen to the medicine cats after everything returns to normal? Will they resume to do their jobs?
Reply Liger
2:58 PM on June 9, 2015 
I have a question. Will Weepingtiger still discover the herb to treat the sickness, even if we don't get to do the new arc or are still planning it?
Reply Ember
3:12 PM on June 9, 2015 
It's probably too early to decide how exactly the shift back will happen, but I think it's safe to say that the ones in charge will be overthrown and new medicine cats will be named to replace them, following traditional leadership.

Weepingtiger will still discover it. It looks like we are going ahead with this new arc, right now we're still in the stages of setting up for it where cats should be getting sick in greater numbers and the MoonClan and NightClan leadership starting to make blatant mistakes and show weaknesses.
Reply Airmid
4:04 PM on June 10, 2015 
Wait I'm confused- it says the third in command is the general thingy, but how is that going to work if they're driving out the leaders?
Reply Ember
4:11 PM on June 10, 2015 
Having them run out was the original idea, this is the newer one that we'll be going with.
Reply L
4:12 PM on June 10, 2015 
Will the "generals (we should really come up with names for these positions)" still have the nine lives they received from StarClan?
Reply Ember
4:18 PM on June 10, 2015 
It makes more sense for the leader/medicine cats to, but I doubt that StarClan would truely approve of this plot enough for them to be given their lives. So yes, the "generals" would keep their lives. The medicine cats could pass it off as them being in more direct danger?
Reply L
4:20 PM on June 10, 2015 
Yeah, that would make perfect sense. The medicine cats could claim they don't need the extra lives since they never really go on patrols or into battle, where the "generals" will all the time.
Reply Airmid
5:13 PM on June 10, 2015 
Ah, okay.
Reply Ember
1:27 PM on June 15, 2015 
Hey guys, now that the cure has been used in MoonClan and DawnClan, it's about time for the MC and DC leaders to be pushing for that second battle. We can begin it Tuesday evening, when the cats are just beginning to show definite improvement in their condition.
Reply Ember
1:12 PM on June 17, 2015 
So, how do we want to go about the uprising itself?

We have a medicine cat meeting scheduled for this coming weekend, so we have a few ways we can play around with that.
-Have an uprising happen in MoonClan, then have the medicine cats meet over the weekend and have a DawnClan uprising after that.
-Drag the battle out a little longer and have the uprising after the medicine cat meeting in both clans simultaneously.
-Push back the medicine cat meeting to next weekend and have both uprisings during this weekend, with possibly a patrol sent to DawnClan.

I think the first or second plan would work best from the plot perspective and for me personally the second one is best because I may not have a whole lot of time to devote to roleplaying this coming weekend. If we do go ahead and do it this week/weekend, we need to hurry to get the official titles and code ready. Suggestions for both are welcome.
Reply Ember
2:37 PM on June 17, 2015 
Here is a code I've drafted up, as stated earlier suggestions are welcome :)

1. Defend your Clan, even with your life. Your loyalty must remain to your Clan and to your clan only.
2. The safety of the clan is more important than the safety of one cat.
3. All Clan cats must acknowledge the authority of StarClan.
4. The word of the Clan medicine cat is the warrior code.
5. Do not hunt or trespass outside of your territory.
6. Boundaries must be checked and marked daily. Challenge all trespassing cats.
7. Elders and kits must be fed before apprentices and warriors. Unless they have permission, apprentices may not eat until they have hunted to feed the elders.
8. Prey is killed only to be eaten. Give thanks to StarClan for its life.
9. A kit must be at least six moons old to become an apprentice.
10. Newly appointed warriors will keep a silent vigil for one night after receiving their warrior name.
11. The medicine cat apprentice will become Clan medicine cat when the medicine cat dies or retires. The new [leader] will be named by the medicine cat when the leader dies or retires.
12. After the death or retirement of the medicine cat or [leader], the new medicine cat or [leader] must be chosen before moonhigh.
13. Medicine cats may not have a mate or kits.
14. A gathering of all Clans is held at the full moon during a truce that lasts for the night. There shall be no fighting among Clans at this time.
15. An honorable warrior does not need to kill other cats to win his battles, unless they are outside the warrior code or it is necessary for self-defense.
Reply L
8:46 PM on June 17, 2015 
Title ideas for the leader once their position is shifted:
Commander
Head Warrior
Chief
Overseer
Lieutenant
General

That's all I got....

For me, either option one or two work well. Having both clans overthrowing their leadership at the same time could get a little hectic, but no more so than having a battle between all the clans.

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