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Posted by Ember on November 30, 2014 at 9:50 PM

Where do you guys want to take the plot from here?


I think that SunClan and MoonClan are due to win a battle and since Wildstar has showed interest in destroying NightClan entirely, they can go and attack NightClan.  Sunken suggested a new battle strategy, where they will attack in waves.  Each clan will split into two or three groups, not too many so we don't get confused about who is in each group and who is attacking when.  Each will attack for a bit and then return, exhausting NightClan's warriors and giving their own cats time to be tended to by the medicine cat before those who are able, go back to fighting in another wave.

I think this would be an interesting strategy to use, though not for this battle.  If MoonClan and SunClan attack NightClan together, they should be trying to end the battle as quickly as possible before NightClan has a chance to turn to DawnClan for help.  It would work far better in an attack against both DawnClan and NightClan together, if SunClan and MoonClan had a great advantage in numbers and could afford to leave warriors out of the battle.

It is also possible our current alliances will begin to crumble, SunClan may not agree with MoonClan trying to destroy NightClan and after Bluestar dies, NightClan and DawnClan may begin to grow apart again.  I personally think we should try to keep up with how things have been for a while longer, both sides seem equally matched and for how things how the clans have begun to feel about eachother, I don't think we could have any other strong alliances for some time.

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61 Comments

Reply Hero
10:21 PM on November 30, 2014 
I like the group thing. It's very clever by how one group of cats could go and fight while the others get ready and when the group of cats are done fighting, the others go while the ones that are hurt and get treated. That's so clever. Also I think that Moonclan and Sunclan could get a chance for winning.
Reply Gray
11:38 PM on November 30, 2014 
My personal opinion is that we shouldn't have more than two clans fighting at a time. It could get s bit confusing for us and for the cats we are roleplaying.
Reply Larka
11:05 AM on December 1, 2014 
I think the group think works well and I think the alliances should start to crumble.
Reply 🎄SnowWolf🎄
12:27 PM on December 1, 2014 
I think the 'attack in waves' thing would go good. It will probably give the all the clans a chance to win.
Reply Night
3:56 PM on December 1, 2014 
I like the group think along with the breaking alliances. Now that Bluestar stepped down to be an elder, especially since Clawstrike doesn't like Nightclan he can break the alliance by sending a group over to Nightclan to attack them and show they don't want the alliance anymore. All of this of course happens after the wave battle.
Reply L
4:58 PM on December 1, 2014 
A quick battle would be the one that I'd like to go with for the upcoming battle. It'd be less taxing for Moonclan and Sunclan, and the whole situation seems like it'd be a lot cleaner than if Dawnclan had time to get involved.

I don't think the alliances should start crumbling not only until after Bluestar's death, but Jetstar's as well. It'd be foolish for either Nightclan or Dawnclan to turn on the other clan, because so far they have done nothing but aid each other in battle and help defend borders together. There's nothing there that could spark a dispute, and after Nightclan loses the battle, they're going to be relying a lot more heavily on their alliance with Dawnclan.
Reply Swan
6:40 PM on December 1, 2014 
I think that they should stay allied up the way it is but Dawnclan isn't as generous as they were when it was with Bluestar
Reply Thrushsoar
7:07 PM on December 1, 2014 
Similar to what Raze said, I believe that the alliance should start crumbling around both Bluestar and Jetstar's death. The new leaders would have no real 'relationship' with each other, and the trust will slowly disintegrate, not immediately, but slowly. If Nightclan and Dawnclan lose another war after this, perhaps Dawnclan could feel as if they were losing too much and slowly drift away from the idea of war? From reading the description of Dawnclan, they seem to be a fairly sensible clan along with very kind hearts, I don't think they are too pleased with the idea of war.
Reply Ember
9:32 PM on December 1, 2014 
From Jaybird on the Moon, since Webs wasn't letting the post go through from her for whatever reason:

I like the idea of this plot. Alliances crumbling was what helped me keep reading. Suggestion: Alliances could turn on eachother with another clan. Even though it wasn't in the books, that doesn't mean it couldn't happen here. Example: Sunclan thinks that it is fighting Nightclan with Moonclan. But when they arrive, they are attacked by Nightclan and Moonclan. Just a suggestion :). Keep up the good work Ember! -
Reply Spottedfur
10:31 PM on December 1, 2014 
I agree with Raze about the alliances. I honestly didn't think that it was in Dawnclan's nature to prevent Jetstar from seeing his kits/mate by crumbling alliances.
Reply Ember
10:49 PM on December 1, 2014 
Okay, so keep the alliances for a long while longer, then possibly have them start to disintegrate once NightClan and DawnClan begin to lose more battles, possibly the war itself, and has entirely new leadership?
Reply Shadow
1:46 AM on December 2, 2014 
I also agree with Raze on the alliance thing.
Reply Darkcrown
8:49 AM on December 2, 2014 
I think it sounds good
Reply Liger
8:27 PM on December 4, 2014 
I'm partial to the wave battle strategy. I'm also fine with SunClan's (possible) reluctance in wiping out NightClan too, and I think it's time that Moon and Sun should win a battle.
Reply ☆Star☆
7:44 AM on December 6, 2014 
I agree with Raze
Reply Riversoul
9:05 AM on December 7, 2014 
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Reply L
9:12 AM on December 7, 2014 
I have to disagree with the deathberries berries plot, or any plot that would have Nightclan attacking Dawnclan the moment Jetstar does. There's no motive. Nightclan and Dawnclan have been tight allies for awhile now, and any random, unprovoked attack from either clan on the other just doesn't make sense. Nightclan's not pure evil, and there's no reason for them to jeopardize a close alliance "just because". Especially after the battle, Nightclan will need Dawnclan, there would be no sudden profit to inflicting harm on the clan.

I actually think it might be a little better for the plot if the alliances don't crumble the moment that the old leaders die. That's how alliances usually go on this site, two clans stick together for awhile but as soon as an old leader dies there's a sudden misunderstanding, or the new leader hates the allied clan, or just wants nothing to do with them. Maybe it'd lead to some other, new plot ideas if we had alliances that actually withstood the death of both old leaders. They wouldn't have to be extremely close alliances, but they could at least still be on good terms.
Reply Sunken
11:23 AM on December 7, 2014 
I agree with Raze on both topics, we need a fresh plot line with the alliances.
Reply Ember
1:08 PM on December 7, 2014 
It doesn't make any sense for NightClan to want to poison DawnClan right now, they've been doing well together.

If we are going to do the wave strategy, I think we should make sure that DawnClan is involved from the beginning so that MoonClan and SunClan couldn't attack suddenly and hope to overwhelm them. However, that opens up the problem of they're going to be evenly matched and attacking in waves would just mean they'd be easier to defete. I agree that it is a cool idea, I just don't think it's going to work with how things are set up with the clans right now. It could possibly work if they were attacking DawnClan without NightClan stepping in, but that's not going to happen. I suggest we save the idea for a later battle when the strategy would make more sense, even if that's going to be far in the future.
Reply ☆Star☆
9:05 PM on December 9, 2014 
There should be some cats in Nightclan that don't want an alliance with Dawnclan and REBELL and then try to poision Dawnclan

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